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3/29/2006 c1 Bronwen Ackeley
Thank you for reviewing my new work. ^_^ Now I'm returning the favor.

I like the pome a lot, mostly because the rhyming flows really well. You captured a really hard emotion, one that's overwhelming, and you turned it into something that's sutble yet powerful. Really nice. I can really see your style being perfected the more you write. Keep it up.

~Bronwen, the Dark Angel~

P.S. This poem has given me an idea for the next chapter in my "Words from..." piece. I'll let you know when it's updated.
3/29/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
Very sad and hopeful... well written
3/11/2006 c1 5singitback
This one was happy and sad; I don't even know how to explain it really. But it was really touching and I really loved it.

PS: I'm glad your still around, I was worried about you since you haven't posted anything new in ages.
3/9/2006 c1 87Chaos Apple
This is so touching! I almost started crying when I read it, brings back memories (self-harm days).

Good Luck.

Love, -Lie to me/I-love-you-for-it

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