8/8/2006 c1 86djsaxon2
Mm, sometimes your words just wash right over my eyes, it makes me all tingly :)

I was gonna make a criticm of the candle line but i re-read and it was just me being stupid, it's actually a really cool metaphor.

Great work, and i've noticed you're a little absent, come back to fictionpress, we miss you :D

Saxon.