for Yellow Room3/12/2006 c3 
2callmebelle
again, i love this, very powerful, but i do think the constant exclamation points take away from the effect. nice work!
2callmebelleagain, i love this, very powerful, but i do think the constant exclamation points take away from the effect. nice work!
3/12/2006 c2 callmebelle
another great chapter. you have mastered simplicity and how to make it powerful. update soon!
another great chapter. you have mastered simplicity and how to make it powerful. update soon!
3/9/2006 c1 2W3DNESDAY
wow, this is seriously creepy. it's very well written though. i reminds me of something by carson mccullers or kind of like tennessee williams' female characters. this is going on my favorites!
2W3DNESDAYwow, this is seriously creepy. it's very well written though. i reminds me of something by carson mccullers or kind of like tennessee williams' female characters. this is going on my favorites!
3/9/2006 c1 12Draketeeth
How strange. It seems all nice and neat and clean cut, but what's outside the window?
A thought provoking story. Must think on it. . .
12DraketeethHow strange. It seems all nice and neat and clean cut, but what's outside the window?
A thought provoking story. Must think on it. . .
3/9/2006 c1 2callmebelle
My English class always gets mad at me for thinking everything is sybolic, but this story seems highly symbolic to me... repression, stuff like that. very nice work. I love how powerful you made these simple words. I cannot wait to read more.
2callmebelleMy English class always gets mad at me for thinking everything is sybolic, but this story seems highly symbolic to me... repression, stuff like that. very nice work. I love how powerful you made these simple words. I cannot wait to read more.