
4/9/2006 c1
156ShadowPharoh
reminds me of my dad. he died a long time ago, though.
i think you really captured the spirit of the moment.
wonderful job.

reminds me of my dad. he died a long time ago, though.
i think you really captured the spirit of the moment.
wonderful job.
3/28/2006 c1
92q is for quirks
Quoth the Tinman: "Now I know I have a heart, because it's broken."
Something like that.This was so unimagingably sad. You really did break my heart and right now I am in tears. It was really good, great description and stuff. But so, so sad...amazing poem.

Quoth the Tinman: "Now I know I have a heart, because it's broken."
Something like that.This was so unimagingably sad. You really did break my heart and right now I am in tears. It was really good, great description and stuff. But so, so sad...amazing poem.
3/26/2006 c1 Too Forgetful
condolences...seriously, i dunno what to say. i mean, we talked 'bout this already. hehe...
condolences...seriously, i dunno what to say. i mean, we talked 'bout this already. hehe...
3/10/2006 c1
16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
you really captured the memories and sadness of this poem. my nana died when i was eight and i never truly got over it. i sympathize deeply for your loss.

you really captured the memories and sadness of this poem. my nana died when i was eight and i never truly got over it. i sympathize deeply for your loss.
3/10/2006 c1
9Rhianika
That gave me shivers :( My gramma died a few years ago and I remember how sad I was for a long time. I think you captured the feeling very well in this poem. Really good poem. I'm sorry for your loss.
Keep writing
~Rhia

That gave me shivers :( My gramma died a few years ago and I remember how sad I was for a long time. I think you captured the feeling very well in this poem. Really good poem. I'm sorry for your loss.
Keep writing
~Rhia
3/10/2006 c1
11les petits bateaux
This was so poignant! My eyes are watering right now...simply beautiful. Much related, don't you think?

This was so poignant! My eyes are watering right now...simply beautiful. Much related, don't you think?
3/10/2006 c1
81Princess-anna57
I'm sorry for your loss. This poem is very, very touching. Thank you for sharing! Keep writing!
~Anna~

I'm sorry for your loss. This poem is very, very touching. Thank you for sharing! Keep writing!
~Anna~