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4/9/2006 c1 156ShadowPharoh
reminds me of my dad. he died a long time ago, though.

i think you really captured the spirit of the moment.

wonderful job.
3/28/2006 c1 92q is for quirks
Quoth the Tinman: "Now I know I have a heart, because it's broken."

Something like that.This was so unimagingably sad. You really did break my heart and right now I am in tears. It was really good, great description and stuff. But so, so sad...amazing poem.
3/26/2006 c1 Too Forgetful
condolences...seriously, i dunno what to say. i mean, we talked 'bout this already. hehe...
3/10/2006 c1 16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
you really captured the memories and sadness of this poem. my nana died when i was eight and i never truly got over it. i sympathize deeply for your loss.
3/10/2006 c1 9Rhianika
That gave me shivers :( My gramma died a few years ago and I remember how sad I was for a long time. I think you captured the feeling very well in this poem. Really good poem. I'm sorry for your loss.

Keep writing

~Rhia
3/10/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
This was so poignant! My eyes are watering right now...simply beautiful. Much related, don't you think?
3/10/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
I'm sorry for your loss. This poem is very, very touching. Thank you for sharing! Keep writing!

~Anna~

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