for Too Late5/18/2006 c1 
5theinvisiblewarrior
Really good poem.. sorta makes you treasure the people in your life now cuz they won't always be there. Overall, really great.
~smeigothicqueen
5theinvisiblewarriorReally good poem.. sorta makes you treasure the people in your life now cuz they won't always be there. Overall, really great.
~smeigothicqueen
5/17/2006 c1 31Suicidal Romance
good work! i like the kinds of poems that start of making you think.
~brinney
p.s. i luv the laughing maniacally thing in ur profile. muahahaha!
31Suicidal Romancegood work! i like the kinds of poems that start of making you think.
~brinney
p.s. i luv the laughing maniacally thing in ur profile. muahahaha!
5/15/2006 c1 9Aluminum Tinkerbell
I really like this! Nice usage of words there!
Good job!
P.S. I love your name...Toxic-Noodle. O_O
9Aluminum TinkerbellI really like this! Nice usage of words there!
Good job!
P.S. I love your name...Toxic-Noodle. O_O
4/21/2006 c1 B34utifulDr34mer
i really like this poem, its like a movie summed into a poem. wow that would be a HOT movie. great now aim daydreaming about this movie, already got my actors in mind...
i really like this poem, its like a movie summed into a poem. wow that would be a HOT movie. great now aim daydreaming about this movie, already got my actors in mind...
4/1/2006 c1 11hippos-anoonymus
Awesome poem, (love the author note by the by...wink wink). You know what this poem reminds me of...guess guess!
okay I'l tell u
a panic at the disco! song, especially this part, "said the man with the white lab coat" I don't know why, I think this would be an awesom panic song you should send them this poem and tell them to make it into song dedicated to you and ...me cuz I pointed it out and I love them with all my HEART AND SOUL! (picture me doing that one thing that I do to my leadsinger ...ya know) heh heh (other reviewers who read this part its not sumtin pornographic or anything it just funny. I mean come own I'm not THAT perverted
11hippos-anoonymusAwesome poem, (love the author note by the by...wink wink). You know what this poem reminds me of...guess guess!
okay I'l tell u
a panic at the disco! song, especially this part, "said the man with the white lab coat" I don't know why, I think this would be an awesom panic song you should send them this poem and tell them to make it into song dedicated to you and ...me cuz I pointed it out and I love them with all my HEART AND SOUL! (picture me doing that one thing that I do to my leadsinger ...ya know) heh heh (other reviewers who read this part its not sumtin pornographic or anything it just funny. I mean come own I'm not THAT perverted
3/11/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was so sweet, bitter sweet. Real friendships can start like that, I used to be a horrible person to my now best friend. The thing about best friends is that they teach you to be better and help you grow.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
197the Stranger in the moonlightThis was so sweet, bitter sweet. Real friendships can start like that, I used to be a horrible person to my now best friend. The thing about best friends is that they teach you to be better and help you grow.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.