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11/7/2006 c1 91fairytale failure
Wow, the last line there sure was a surprise. To me this poem shows how beauty and horror can co-exist in the same place.
7/15/2006 c1 31emptyword
That sent me reeling. I wondered why a sunrise poem would be under the "horror" genre. "Quaint" is a nice word for a sunrise.
3/29/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. nice juxaposition.. beautifully written
3/18/2006 c1 Moonlight Rain
I love how mood changes drastically at the last line^_^
3/11/2006 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
great haiku- i love the diff. b/w the first two lines and the last one. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~
3/11/2006 c1 40Dark Hammer Helm
Reminds us of poor rural places, where disease is scattered like seed on a garden. Where pestilence is common and families live in harsh abandon. No food, money or shelter.

You've been judged by the darkness! ^_^

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