9/12/2006 c1 7significant-dust-speck
"And no, I'm not important,So it won't matter when I fall."

I usually like the closing lines but these are particularly awesome. I offer my praise of your unusual ideas and wonderful wording.

3/24/2006 c1 1Shiba-.-Sempai
*Walks briskly onto empty, dust covered stage. Reaching the center, a spotlight appears. Unraveling a ornate, long, scroll, I clear my throat and begin to read.* This is the statement of Shiba-.-Sempai, which, being made while of sound mind (don't say a word) and body, rings true in every syllable. You, are loved and cherished by your friends and deemed VERY important. You may be walking on high heels, but we of the clunky combat boots and comfy flipflops will always be there to catch and steady you when you happen to stumble. This is not a burden, nor a bother, but something we will always be willing to do because we CARE ABOUT YOU. This message, saccharine as it sounds, will be repeated until it becomes inculcated into your head. The end. Now, onto the review! Severe squees at the awesomeness were definitly being uttered while reading. "Full of nothings that I've said." This was almost an exact definition of the nagging worry I feel at the end of the day when I realize how completely asinine some of my nattering was. Half of my stories never have a point, and this statement sums up about half of the ramblings I impose on unfortunate others. I loved how the lines before seemed to lead up to that one line, making it appear even more powerful. "Life in my shoes, Yeah, they're glittery and fake." I found these lines to be so fascinating, both because of the vivid imagery and what I deemed a subtle reference to the "Walk in someone else's shoes" (even if that wasn't intentional.) I also was thrilled by the fact that you made the 'f' and 'e' bold, merely because it seemed, somehow, to add a desperate sort of emphasis. Oddly, it reminded my slightly of e.e. cummings. (Woot!) "I teeter-totter on high heels." This and the above lines seriously managed to get incredibly sharp images to present themselves, which is uncommon for me when reading poetry. Fanbloodytabulous.

3/14/2006 c1 141AllyCred
I love it, especially the last lines, its like you took them exactly from my head, so beautiful, well done!

3/12/2006 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
great poem. i love the lines 'life in my shoes, yeah, they're glittery and fake' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~