for Meditation 1: I Am The Tree3/15/2006 c1 
12Vas Da Gama
That-was-to-beautiful.I feel kinda sad for tree."Here I stand: a silent wallReigning over earth and all.How I long to laugh and play;Sport around and eat all day.But that is not my destinyFor I am a tree."lovey tone to the poem.very well portrayed.:o)keep writing !
12Vas Da GamaThat-was-to-beautiful.I feel kinda sad for tree."Here I stand: a silent wallReigning over earth and all.How I long to laugh and play;Sport around and eat all day.But that is not my destinyFor I am a tree."lovey tone to the poem.very well portrayed.:o)keep writing !
3/13/2006 c1 8Hyacinthe Wing
This is sweet and rhythmic! Just a little hang-up on the "eat all day" line. Otherwise, excellent work.
8Hyacinthe WingThis is sweet and rhythmic! Just a little hang-up on the "eat all day" line. Otherwise, excellent work.