for Burn My Skin10/4/2006 c1 
197the Stranger in the moonlight
Harsh, angry, powerful.
I liked the format you wrote it in.
~the Stranger in the moonlight~
197the Stranger in the moonlightHarsh, angry, powerful.
I liked the format you wrote it in.
~the Stranger in the moonlight~
4/19/2006 c1 83White is a Sin
Interesting...almost harmonious..like part of a song...good work...
Well, thanks for the review ^_^ much appreciated.
83White is a SinInteresting...almost harmonious..like part of a song...good work...
Well, thanks for the review ^_^ much appreciated.
4/7/2006 c1 31Holly Rose E
it may be short, but it holds a lot of emotion and sort of lingers even after its over. good job.
31Holly Rose Eit may be short, but it holds a lot of emotion and sort of lingers even after its over. good job.
3/15/2006 c1 ii
You have an interesting idea of what words rhyme...
Anyway, it's a nice poem, but the font decoration wasn't necessary. When you have a poem that works by itself (like this one), it's best to leave the words alone, or maybe add a few italics to highlight things.
All the formatting makes it look like the tasteless angst rants posted here and since it's not, it would be a better idea to let the words use their power.
You have an interesting idea of what words rhyme...
Anyway, it's a nice poem, but the font decoration wasn't necessary. When you have a poem that works by itself (like this one), it's best to leave the words alone, or maybe add a few italics to highlight things.
All the formatting makes it look like the tasteless angst rants posted here and since it's not, it would be a better idea to let the words use their power.
3/14/2006 c1 Benjamin - To Be Deleted
I like the way you spaced the words, and the way you did the format. Very nice. thanks for reviewing my masks poem. I really appreciate it.
:Benjamin:
I like the way you spaced the words, and the way you did the format. Very nice. thanks for reviewing my masks poem. I really appreciate it.
:Benjamin:
3/14/2006 c1 133Dying Rose
I love the formatting of this poem, it really brings it out. It's very well written. I like the first two lines best. It's a powerful, meaningful poem and flows well despite the somewhat forced rhyme scheme. Great job!
133Dying RoseI love the formatting of this poem, it really brings it out. It's very well written. I like the first two lines best. It's a powerful, meaningful poem and flows well despite the somewhat forced rhyme scheme. Great job!
3/13/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
the format really brought certain parts out with more power.
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorothe format really brought certain parts out with more power.
keep writing!
3/13/2006 c1 237classic violet
like watching a boy from far away. just one look is all it takes.
man, i love this. simple yet beautiful.
237classic violetlike watching a boy from far away. just one look is all it takes.
man, i love this. simple yet beautiful.
3/13/2006 c1 fasgagasga
pretty good, like how you change the fonr for some of the words, gives it a good charactor maybe is the word to it.
pretty good, like how you change the fonr for some of the words, gives it a good charactor maybe is the word to it.