for Fulminate12/8/2006 c1 
24Sarah-Brighteyes
Whoa what a harsh piece!
It is very cold.. angry... I guess I shouldnt use the word cold because its more bitter and heated than anything else.
I love the line, "Acting as if you were a beast who was caged." Because this line is almost as though it shows the primal state of anger and rage. A primative way in which people fight is through fists... almost past the state of rational thinking.
I liked this piece.
Write on.
24Sarah-BrighteyesWhoa what a harsh piece!
It is very cold.. angry... I guess I shouldnt use the word cold because its more bitter and heated than anything else.
I love the line, "Acting as if you were a beast who was caged." Because this line is almost as though it shows the primal state of anger and rage. A primative way in which people fight is through fists... almost past the state of rational thinking.
I liked this piece.
Write on.