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12/8/2006 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Whoa what a harsh piece!

It is very cold.. angry... I guess I shouldnt use the word cold because its more bitter and heated than anything else.

I love the line, "Acting as if you were a beast who was caged." Because this line is almost as though it shows the primal state of anger and rage. A primative way in which people fight is through fists... almost past the state of rational thinking.

I liked this piece.

Write on.

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