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7/25/2006 c1 K. D. Rayne
MARMAR! okay...first off...you know what i think of this poem...

FUCKING AWESOME

of course...anyway...just thought i'd review this sense its 6:08 in the a.m. as of now and im bored and fucking hell and needing a smoke *sigh*

DAMN THIS INSOMNIA!

hehe...okay...im done now ^_^talk to you soon!
5/30/2006 c1 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!

Okay, very iteresting. I don't remember my jerk's eyes as much as I do the expression in them. But, hey, I'm a writer, one that deals largely in emotion and I see emotion more than color and beauty. In fact, my jerk never was remotely handsome or pretty in my eyes. Just strong, and smart. Not to mention devious. But, I like this poem, it deals with emotion and deep description. KEEP WRITING!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

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