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11/14/2012 c1 WhyWeWashTheWindows
I read this mind consuming story all the way to the end only to see the first one. This really sucks. I can't go read it now because I know he will be with horrible Jackie in the end and I can't see Terry alive through it knowing he's going to die. I hate stories that move me so much I spend the whole day reading them with no idea what to do when they end lol.
5/27/2009 c23 Narcoleptic86
Love reading about Will, even if he's a man-wh0re. Hope he and Tom stay together.
2/14/2009 c23 wtfwaswrongwithteenme
I love this story. I cried at the end when terry died he was one of my favorite characters. Also I was suprised about micheal cheating I didn't see his character as one who would but I guess anything could happen
10/14/2008 c11 layne
"I’m not in a position to care about what he’s thinking, though, and continue enjoying my orgasm"

haha awesome, what an asshole
7/13/2007 c23 2mia5081
I loved your story, but I'm getting used to saying that lol, since so far I love all your stories. I am wondering though, if Mikey and Brett will stay together since he's away, and probably always will be. Are you thinking about having a one-shot or something about them, to see how they're doing? I want them to stay together =)

6/19/2007 c23 9Asitha
I just read straight through 'Will' and then this story and I have to say I love it. I'd love to gush over absolutely everything, but I'm sick and it's taking all I've got to sit at the computer and write this review. I love Will, I love Tom and Jamie and Brett. Sometimes I'm iffy on Michael. I can't wait for more. This is definitely going on my story alert. ^_^
2/28/2007 c23 Hi no Tori
Wow. Just... wow. I started around midnight reading "Will", then moved on to this, and what can I say? It's past four A.M. and I only just finished. I still want more. I won't CHECK for more right now because I badly need to get some sleep, but damn, this is brilliant. You're amazingly talented, and I hope to be seeing more of your work. Thanks for sharing this with us!
2/19/2007 c3 69tomato-greens
Hey look it's sex. 9.9 I'm five.

Anyway, Jackie is a jerk, and I am hoping something happens so that he isn't with Will anymore, because I like Will. And jerks are jerks. And people you like + jerk ≠ good.

Didn't notice any real typos, just stylistic changes that I might make but aren't important. Yay your excellent characterisation!
2/19/2007 c2 tomato-greens
Wow, it's been a while!

I like this so far. I never finished the first Will story and I'm too lazy to go back, but I don't think I'll have too much of a problem catching up. :)

Some typo-grammar things:

*"'No, we can go TO the shops,' he argues. 'I bRought my credit card with me.'" (You're missing the to and r.)

*"Roman's father pays for tuition at a private school and bought him a car merely for graduating FROM high school."

*"His girlfriend took /days/ in labour(. or ;) I found it painful enough sitting at the hospital . . . ."

*"'Happy (e)ighteenth birthday(,) Roman . . . ."

Other than that, I didn't see any problems. I especially liked "It's so much nicer to think of them as asexual beings . . . ." because *yes*. And the word "schoolies." Hee.
2/2/2007 c23 2signourney
So notorious, in fact, that my foster father Brett refers to Jackie as ‘the proverbial fire hydrant over which all the neighbourhood dogs have had a piss’. - Best line EVER!

Waah not Terry ;_;

Great story!

update soon

8/15/2006 c23 jma
No... Terry died... I loved Terry... -sniffles. And it annoys me that Mike cheated on Brett... even though I guess I could see his point of view.

On the other hand - YES! Go Will! Fuck off Jackie and welcome in Tom! -nods head- Hell yes...

I just wish you would start the Oliver/Seth fic back up... I really enjoyed it before you took it off... -sighs-

Anwyays...Great writing, as yours always is. Keep up the awesome work!
7/15/2006 c23 16Collar de Espinas
I love Tom and Will, and am overjoyed that Tom thought about Will when thinking about his housing plans. *big fat happy grin*

Terry's funeral was sad...but thankfully not with the whole 'sob-fest-drama' cliche. Terry will always be one of my favourite characters from your stories. I'm going to miss him...

I hope we get to see more Will and Tom. Now, to check out your new fic...
7/13/2006 c23 10afk
gawd poor terry T_T but well i hope jamie wil be fine! And well jsut as always: loved it! XD
7/11/2006 c23 25Esquirella
"Brett's ex-boyfriend"? Who might that have been? Terry's family is made up of a bunch of assholes! I hate them! I love Tom. What did that guy that looked like Jackie do?
7/11/2006 c23 32eldrin
Wonderful. Even after his passing we're still hit with classic Terry.

It's really delightful that Tom is considering Will in his housing plans.
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