
4/29/2013 c1 J
In guilt, in trepidation, I remain to tribulate,
Certain, in uncertainty, this moment will not fade.
And ever so silent, I'll whisper to the night_
Of my Love-less Lover, and our unborn child.
I don't love you anymore,
In guilt, in trepidation, I remain to tribulate,
Certain, in uncertainty, this moment will not fade.
And ever so silent, I'll whisper to the night_
Of my Love-less Lover, and our unborn child.
I don't love you anymore,
3/16/2006 c1
144chaos called creation
I felt the rhyming was a bit forced in some parts, but this is very well written!
thank you for your overwhelming number of reviews by the way. i was greatly delighted on your analyzes on 'seven acts' and your thoughts on the other pieces as well. thanks again, and keep writing

I felt the rhyming was a bit forced in some parts, but this is very well written!
thank you for your overwhelming number of reviews by the way. i was greatly delighted on your analyzes on 'seven acts' and your thoughts on the other pieces as well. thanks again, and keep writing