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for Theresa in silence

3/14/2006 c1 22Lucid Nonsense
Really nice job. I love the rhyme, very well done ("belates", "in lieu"- clever, clever). The description creates a strong mood and I can almost see her. I think the rhythm falls a bit off, but nothing drastic enough to detract too noticeably.

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