for Tears of Blood8/3/2006 c1 
7Arcularis
wow. what a story. it really showed that someone can hold a gruge for a long time. The way you tied the "rain washing away her tears" in was really good.
7Arculariswow. what a story. it really showed that someone can hold a gruge for a long time. The way you tied the "rain washing away her tears" in was really good.
5/16/2006 c1 grl w a birf
wow this is really good. kinda creepy tho. u scare me.
wow this is really good. kinda creepy tho. u scare me.
4/7/2006 c1 18Plinky
Wow, that's a lot more horrible than I was expecting. The beginning was really beautiful, I love the first sentence (YOu seem to start well)
"and finally clears up her acne" I liked this detail.
I can't... I don't like how she killed the child. Actually, I don't like any of the killing. But apart from that, it felt a little detached, emotionless.
But it was nicely written. Just got a little morbid for me.
Keep writing!
18PlinkyWow, that's a lot more horrible than I was expecting. The beginning was really beautiful, I love the first sentence (YOu seem to start well)
"and finally clears up her acne" I liked this detail.
I can't... I don't like how she killed the child. Actually, I don't like any of the killing. But apart from that, it felt a little detached, emotionless.
But it was nicely written. Just got a little morbid for me.
Keep writing!
3/22/2006 c1 18Operation Miranda
If I had to think of one word to describe this story it would be "morbid." This story manages to go beyond most morbid stories, however, and requires some serious thought. It's too bad it takes so long for women to realize they're better without cheating husbands, then incidents like this probably wouldn't happen.
18Operation MirandaIf I had to think of one word to describe this story it would be "morbid." This story manages to go beyond most morbid stories, however, and requires some serious thought. It's too bad it takes so long for women to realize they're better without cheating husbands, then incidents like this probably wouldn't happen.