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4/15/2007 c1 80just dani
aw that is so sad and cute! the ending made me smile
6/18/2006 c1 5aurora llyria
Aww, sweet! Hehehe...I pretty much like any poem with rain. Like in your profile. :-) I LOVE rain! Ahem. I am calm. Only NoT! Because I LOVE rain!

Right, I'm going to stop being quite so freaky now. Yes so...I especially like the last two lines. They're very pretty and, as I said, sweet. And the rhyme is nice, not awkward and icky like some attempts at rhymes.
3/15/2006 c1 107roses on a grave
aw...how adorable. the imagery isn't the best, but overall this was a very lovely poem. good job.

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