
5/27/2006 c3
40Romanze
I absolutely adore this! I cannot wait for you to continue!
I'm really impressed by the storyline and ur writing style.
keep going! u hav a promising future with this.
-Romanze

I absolutely adore this! I cannot wait for you to continue!
I'm really impressed by the storyline and ur writing style.
keep going! u hav a promising future with this.
-Romanze
5/16/2006 c3 Elegent Beauty
Okay, i like it, a lot. But the chapters could be a little bit longer. Add more detail about their surrounding's and things like that. Other than that, good job1
Caity
Okay, i like it, a lot. But the chapters could be a little bit longer. Add more detail about their surrounding's and things like that. Other than that, good job1
Caity
5/10/2006 c2
40Romanze
omg, u have to keep writing! i can't wait to read more! keep going keep goin now now now!
i luv this so much! theres only a few typos and thats it! KEP GOING! I"M INSPIRING U TO WRITE RIGHT NOW!
lol, later!
-Romanze

omg, u have to keep writing! i can't wait to read more! keep going keep goin now now now!
i luv this so much! theres only a few typos and thats it! KEP GOING! I"M INSPIRING U TO WRITE RIGHT NOW!
lol, later!
-Romanze
5/10/2006 c1 Romanze
lol, i luv this. its really creative and has a good use of humor. ur writing style is amazing and i can tell its going to develop even more over time, so keep writing!
i especially love the part about the receptionist smiling, great job!
can't wait to read more!
- Romanze
lol, i luv this. its really creative and has a good use of humor. ur writing style is amazing and i can tell its going to develop even more over time, so keep writing!
i especially love the part about the receptionist smiling, great job!
can't wait to read more!
- Romanze
3/26/2006 c2
5Drops of Jewpiter
great update, matt and quin sound hot, can't wait to see what happens next. btw, why is your writing centered?
~dropsofjewpiter~

great update, matt and quin sound hot, can't wait to see what happens next. btw, why is your writing centered?
~dropsofjewpiter~
3/19/2006 c1 Drops of Jewpiter
great start- i love how you compare and elevator to a game of tetris- very creative. this sounds like a pretty cool story- can't wait till ya update
~dropsofjewpiter~
great start- i love how you compare and elevator to a game of tetris- very creative. this sounds like a pretty cool story- can't wait till ya update
~dropsofjewpiter~