for Significant3/29/2006 c1 
23La Gitane
Ooh, very much like the message of this, it articulates what I try to explain to people with a great deal of efficiency. Very powerful and very daunting middle there...
Well done.
23La GitaneOoh, very much like the message of this, it articulates what I try to explain to people with a great deal of efficiency. Very powerful and very daunting middle there...
Well done.
3/17/2006 c1 43SumiFritzN
Wow. It makes me feel like nothing, and yet...screaming is a part of the world, too. I don't know how to explain what I mean...but very good job. Short, but very meaningful. Another great poem!Nicole
43SumiFritzNWow. It makes me feel like nothing, and yet...screaming is a part of the world, too. I don't know how to explain what I mean...but very good job. Short, but very meaningful. Another great poem!Nicole
3/17/2006 c1 56AsianScaper
I particularly liked this piece and how the last line is isolated and the first, isolated as well. You move from the small to the unfathomable. Well written, this certainly spoke to me of my own little light in the big dark of the universe.
56AsianScaperI particularly liked this piece and how the last line is isolated and the first, isolated as well. You move from the small to the unfathomable. Well written, this certainly spoke to me of my own little light in the big dark of the universe.
3/16/2006 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
amazing poem. it has so much meaning to it- and i love the style you wrote it in. awesome job :)~dropsofjewpiter~
5Drops of Jewpiteramazing poem. it has so much meaning to it- and i love the style you wrote it in. awesome job :)~dropsofjewpiter~