for Heartbreak on the Asphalt12/31/2006 c1 
281ThisCut-UpAngel
This feels like a shot of adreline to the heart. Another explosive piece!
281ThisCut-UpAngelThis feels like a shot of adreline to the heart. Another explosive piece!
4/4/2006 c1 28emilyrachel18
This is the most horrific and yet (sickly) beautiful poem i have ever read about love. As always your description is outstanding. I'm just sorry that this is how you feel.
28emilyrachel18This is the most horrific and yet (sickly) beautiful poem i have ever read about love. As always your description is outstanding. I'm just sorry that this is how you feel.
3/22/2006 c1 87Chaos Apple
This is so /beautiful(ly written.)/
I wish I had talent like yours.
Btw, I love the imagery you used here-it blew me away.
-Babydoll, you're going on my faves list.
87Chaos AppleThis is so /beautiful(ly written.)/
I wish I had talent like yours.
Btw, I love the imagery you used here-it blew me away.
-Babydoll, you're going on my faves list.
3/20/2006 c1 238classic violet
I'm so sorry to hear. I hope you'll be able to be peiced back together someday.
& this poem is so beautiful. It's so delicate & yet so stunning. My, the pure delightness of this.
238classic violetI'm so sorry to hear. I hope you'll be able to be peiced back together someday.
& this poem is so beautiful. It's so delicate & yet so stunning. My, the pure delightness of this.
3/19/2006 c1 71MidnightStar005
That is really sad, but you know what it was well written. I love it! I know that you can get throught this!
~xoxo~
71MidnightStar005That is really sad, but you know what it was well written. I love it! I know that you can get throught this!
~xoxo~
3/18/2006 c1 79Ashes.to.Acid
Believe me...I know how you feel. Love should never be like this, but unfortunately, the truth has become distorted by greed. Reading this was haunting...almost like seeing a mirror-image of myself crying out for solace. My heart breaks with every word.
79Ashes.to.AcidBelieve me...I know how you feel. Love should never be like this, but unfortunately, the truth has become distorted by greed. Reading this was haunting...almost like seeing a mirror-image of myself crying out for solace. My heart breaks with every word.
3/17/2006 c1 24she's not breathing
oh my God. fucking wow. you break my heart with your writing. this is amazing, & soSO bravehonest. i could never be like this. girl, you took my breath away with this. incredible. absolutely heart-stoppingly incredible. both the writing & emotion, like a bullet to the heart (damncliché). i am so sorry about the pain you don't deserve it & you're like your writing, fragile, blunt, cracking, beautiful. lovelove it. thankyou for sharing & i hopepray you pull through it somehow.
~kait
24she's not breathingoh my God. fucking wow. you break my heart with your writing. this is amazing, & soSO bravehonest. i could never be like this. girl, you took my breath away with this. incredible. absolutely heart-stoppingly incredible. both the writing & emotion, like a bullet to the heart (damncliché). i am so sorry about the pain you don't deserve it & you're like your writing, fragile, blunt, cracking, beautiful. lovelove it. thankyou for sharing & i hopepray you pull through it somehow.
~kait
3/17/2006 c1 77by His blood
ohgod, i'm so sorry. i hope you know that i'm not just saying this, i really am sorry about everything that you're going through. i know that this won't make you feel any better, but no one deserves this pain. love.is.hell, and i hope that you can get out of this soon. god, he deserves so much better than you. you write such amazing poetry, and no one should go through this, let alone someone like you. please, you can hate me for saying this, but i know exactly how you feel. it's been a year now that i've dealt with this same goddamn love that was supposed to be beautiful, but ... i guess sometimes ... i don't know. i'm sorry for this and if i sound pathetic, i just want to say that i really am sorry. i hope you feel better about this soon, and i hope you can get over him and everything he's done.
77by His bloodohgod, i'm so sorry. i hope you know that i'm not just saying this, i really am sorry about everything that you're going through. i know that this won't make you feel any better, but no one deserves this pain. love.is.hell, and i hope that you can get out of this soon. god, he deserves so much better than you. you write such amazing poetry, and no one should go through this, let alone someone like you. please, you can hate me for saying this, but i know exactly how you feel. it's been a year now that i've dealt with this same goddamn love that was supposed to be beautiful, but ... i guess sometimes ... i don't know. i'm sorry for this and if i sound pathetic, i just want to say that i really am sorry. i hope you feel better about this soon, and i hope you can get over him and everything he's done.