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12/1/2018 c16 the0nion
What a wild ride it has been. Amazing twists, romance, and drama. Lord the drama. I'm so pleased with your exceptional writing skill. It's always a delight to read completed works that are so well polished. What a gem your stories are. THANK YOU for completing such a wonderful story and spinning it so beautifully. I am looking forward to reading your other works! This is the second one I've read today. I'm grateful today is Saturday although I'm wishing right now that it was Friday instead...
5/27/2018 c16 Ames
Your stories are awesome and if i were not a uni student, i would have donated money so that I could read many more! Keep writing Please! Also don't forget to get your stories on Scribd and Amazon. I'll get my entire uni cohort buying them for sure! Thanks for being awesome!
5/8/2018 c16 HoneySpace
Agdhdhjdjsksksjj thank you so much for sharing this story! Its brillant and right now i am made so speechless that I have no idea how to compliment you of your writing skill and your story. Needless to say, I am so so glad to have found this gem. Thank you!
9/25/2017 c1 2Darkheartsfiction
The romance seemed almost too perfect between them. They found no flaws in each other which made it kind of unrealistic, and problems only occurred whenever something related to the main plot was happening. Despite that, I still liked it.
12/30/2016 c16 Feb
A very interesting and fun story to read. I love all your stories, keep it up! :)
10/4/2016 c16 4Natto'n'Chibiko
Amazing fic. I really loved it. I read it in one go !
I especially loved the way you wrote Mora and Hadrin's relationship, they love each other deeply and we can feel it. It feels realistic. It really is an amazing story, bravo :)
9/14/2016 c16 Guest
Firstly, I think you did a great job on the technical aspects of this story! Your grammar and diction were precise, and you clearly demonstrated your desire to write about the unexpected. However, I had a couple of things I'd like to point out about the relationship between Mora and Hadrin: while it was definitely meant to be sweet, and it came across that you were trying to write it that way. However, I can't help but wonder if in your first draft of this story, Mora was female. In many interactions between Mora and other characters, Mora exhibits multiple stereotypes of a typical female lead character/love interest: the younger and inexperienced-in-bed blushing bride; the emotional sensitivity (in this case manifested in a special power); the bitchy competing love interest; there are other stereotypes present as well. Additionally, the interactions about Mora and Haldrin's relationship display instances of misogyny, even though Mora is a man. Mora in one instance tells Halvar that he is obedient to the will of his husband; he is expected to give his body to the prince, as part of his marital duties; he is usually only considered by other characters to be an extension of Hadrin, or a means to an end (in this case the end to world destruction). Mora is even described as effeminate in multiple instances. I recognize that you were attempting to be inclusive of an LGBTQ relationship, but unfortunately some unfortunate tropes were simply put onto a man, rather than explored extensively or not included at all.
6/11/2016 c16 Materic Estrada
I love all your stories, as different they are one from the other. I first, I found Space Cadet to be entertaining and tried to find more of your work; now I've come to love the Wizard Prince and the books before this. I'd love to buy them as paperback if you ever decide to publish them or if some smart editorial house finds your treasures and publish them. Best wishes for your writing gift.
3/20/2016 c16 6Drengade
Well done again, you consistently create characters i cannot help but love. The setting for this story was wonderful and the plot and relationships played out perfectly to fit it, as always you have brought me a very enjoyable experience.
5/1/2015 c16 MissLollee
Goodness i love your story!
4/17/2015 c1 LightArray
Momsdarksecret, I'm a bit surprised when I'm reading this story without any clue about it. I thought the story would be about dragons fighting each other when I saw the title. But this is really great! (y) I'm so touched with Mora and Hadrin's love to each other. 3 I love the flow of the story. You didn't make me stop reading it. Great! You're one of the best gay(m/m) auhtor! (y) Thanks for making these stories free in this site. 3 I'm looking forward for many stories from you, Great author. :)
3/16/2015 c16 8Halimede
Very nice! Stressful too! I feel bad about the babies though and wish there could have been another way. It just seems a bit twisted to rejoice or take satisfaction in anyway about the death of a child in the womb. And I feel like not enough sensitivity was taken with the subject. Idk, just my personal opinion. Loved the fic, the romance was lovely and gorgeous.
2/19/2015 c16 SpaceTurtle
I REALLY enjoyed this tale! Very well thought out history and some fantastic characters, some bland and difficult to understand characters as well but overall they where great!
1/15/2015 c16 Guest
This is easily one of the most amazing and stunning stories I have ever read. You're an excellent writer.
12/14/2014 c12 lea
.. I like Leilan much better.
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