for Enchantment6/5/2006 c1 
5Lobsterboy
Yo, the keyas!If you can raed tihs you are vrey lcuky bceuase olny 55 polepe out of 100 can.Waoh man the clros, the clros!
Svae the Lbotesrs!
P.S. Ncie pecie of wrok!Good Job!
5LobsterboyYo, the keyas!If you can raed tihs you are vrey lcuky bceuase olny 55 polepe out of 100 can.Waoh man the clros, the clros!
Svae the Lbotesrs!
P.S. Ncie pecie of wrok!Good Job!
4/13/2006 c1 2Ame Megami
Oh! I've seen this somewhere...Ah, yes. Kurio caught one of Catcher's papers. =PAnyways, nicce work! -cheers for no reason- ((BTW, I'm Yuri! Yuri-chan!))
2Ame MegamiOh! I've seen this somewhere...Ah, yes. Kurio caught one of Catcher's papers. =PAnyways, nicce work! -cheers for no reason- ((BTW, I'm Yuri! Yuri-chan!))
3/24/2006 c2 19Olivine
honestly, i think i liked the second half a little better.
the only reason is because when i start reading a poem that continuosly says a line, over and over, it gets annoying. dont be bothered by that, though. some people like it. if i were writing a poem like this though, i wouldve said "it may be" only once, in the very beginning, and maybe say it once again a quarter of the way through. but remember, were different when it comes to poetry. well, dtories, too, but were not talking about that.
anyways, i did like it. its definitely different seeing some rhymes comong from you, aredhel, cuz well, ive never seen anything but your stories. besides the first poem, before this one.
well, keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-
ps- you havent forgotten about my stories, have you? :( hehe...somethings actually happening in a story the silverwind tells, now. a little something, but its better than nothing.
19Olivinehonestly, i think i liked the second half a little better.
the only reason is because when i start reading a poem that continuosly says a line, over and over, it gets annoying. dont be bothered by that, though. some people like it. if i were writing a poem like this though, i wouldve said "it may be" only once, in the very beginning, and maybe say it once again a quarter of the way through. but remember, were different when it comes to poetry. well, dtories, too, but were not talking about that.
anyways, i did like it. its definitely different seeing some rhymes comong from you, aredhel, cuz well, ive never seen anything but your stories. besides the first poem, before this one.
well, keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-
ps- you havent forgotten about my stories, have you? :( hehe...somethings actually happening in a story the silverwind tells, now. a little something, but its better than nothing.
3/24/2006 c2 51Arichos
A bit jumpy, but manages to stay together. Really good poem, i love it. Wouldn't change a thing.
51ArichosA bit jumpy, but manages to stay together. Really good poem, i love it. Wouldn't change a thing.
3/24/2006 c1 Arichos
that was...for lack of a better word, enchanting. I loved it, you created a really good feeling with this poem. Awesome job.
that was...for lack of a better word, enchanting. I loved it, you created a really good feeling with this poem. Awesome job.
3/18/2006 c1 19Olivine
... tivions curse...tivions curse... tivions curse... im going to make that thought haunt you until you update. tivions curse... tivions curse...
well at least youve put something up. i thought you were dead again! haha...wow, im so weird. anyways awesome poem. i like how you didnt say exactly what it was that was enchanting. the mystery of it sort of hangs in the air, after its been read.
did you avatar, by the way? and then the preview for the next one? wow, i cannot wait for the next episode! :D
keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-
19Olivine... tivions curse...tivions curse... tivions curse... im going to make that thought haunt you until you update. tivions curse... tivions curse...
well at least youve put something up. i thought you were dead again! haha...wow, im so weird. anyways awesome poem. i like how you didnt say exactly what it was that was enchanting. the mystery of it sort of hangs in the air, after its been read.
did you avatar, by the way? and then the preview for the next one? wow, i cannot wait for the next episode! :D
keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-
3/18/2006 c1 4Nienna Calmcacil
wow awesome! i totally suck at poetry _ o well lol very interesting!it would rock if u put on some more to this site.~nienna~PS can u be my friend? plz?lol
4Nienna Calmcacilwow awesome! i totally suck at poetry _ o well lol very interesting!it would rock if u put on some more to this site.~nienna~PS can u be my friend? plz?lol
3/17/2006 c1 1Dacey Chevalier
Loved this poem...But I love TC more! *Chases Aredhel around with a pen, notebook, and stick* Heehee, like I should talk! I am working on the *real* Ch. 5, but I have to rewrite my beginning.
Luv, xOTeenWriter109Ox
1Dacey ChevalierLoved this poem...But I love TC more! *Chases Aredhel around with a pen, notebook, and stick* Heehee, like I should talk! I am working on the *real* Ch. 5, but I have to rewrite my beginning.
Luv, xOTeenWriter109Ox