for American Duchess1/13/2009 c1 
25UrFaveFreek
Dude you should watch momma's boy. The show is alot like this only I have one problem. They are all nice, sweet and yada yada, you need rude fawning sluts! That is just what makes good TV! I know I have a unique opinion, ur welcome! :P
25UrFaveFreekDude you should watch momma's boy. The show is alot like this only I have one problem. They are all nice, sweet and yada yada, you need rude fawning sluts! That is just what makes good TV! I know I have a unique opinion, ur welcome! :P
3/10/2008 c1 blackbubbleblue
this is going to be so funny but i can't wait to get rid of some people so it can get a little more in depth.
this is going to be so funny but i can't wait to get rid of some people so it can get a little more in depth.
3/8/2008 c3 5Ocean's pebble
This is really good.
umm... yeah.
Methinks that Alexandra and Ethan are going to end up together, though.
I mean, he want's to find Atlantis and stuff, and she's an archeologist, right?
It makes sense...
5Ocean's pebbleThis is really good.
umm... yeah.
Methinks that Alexandra and Ethan are going to end up together, though.
I mean, he want's to find Atlantis and stuff, and she's an archeologist, right?
It makes sense...
1/15/2007 c3 1Zoius and the Devil
awesome! another awesome fic from Tessandra!
seriously, this is really well-written! and the plot is fun, too! i'm so excited about it!
please, please, PLEASE update soon!
~kon
1Zoius and the Devilawesome! another awesome fic from Tessandra!
seriously, this is really well-written! and the plot is fun, too! i'm so excited about it!
please, please, PLEASE update soon!
~kon
12/29/2006 c3 1Enaid
i love the whole let the readers vote people off! i cant wait until the next chapter to vote people off. As much as i dont like Katherine she has to stay because she's going to be the evil bitchy one.! yay!
1Enaidi love the whole let the readers vote people off! i cant wait until the next chapter to vote people off. As much as i dont like Katherine she has to stay because she's going to be the evil bitchy one.! yay!
10/30/2006 c3 82Isabella22
This sounds really interesting! But one thing that bothered me was that more than half of the girls had some type of brown hair. It was slightly annoying.
Keep updating!
-Isabella22
82Isabella22This sounds really interesting! But one thing that bothered me was that more than half of the girls had some type of brown hair. It was slightly annoying.
Keep updating!
-Isabella22
10/21/2006 c3 5Uisukiiinyoursleep
Brilliant premise for a story! A bit satirical, and I love how it reflects on the reality-tv phenomenom. I've already picked out favorites!
Stay: *I love love love Lyda! She's my favorite. I love how unaffected she seems, non-judgemental and just pure cheer, friendly, and considerate.
*I also liked Alexandra- I can see her being the unintentional comic relief in the story.
*I love the idea of Misty's character; clingy and TMI- a great set-up for lots of awkward/embarrassing situations (without her realizing it), and just another good comic relief character... she also seems genuine.
*Danielle. I liked her, she's very mysterious to me, and seems to have a lot of depth. I want to know more about her character, and she outshines the other "I'm too good and intelligent for this" girls.
*Lastly, I really liked Courtney. I like her purely because I think it's be hilarious if she's in this reality show designed to win a Duke, but instead can't help going for the hot cameraman! Pure genius.
Girls who I found extremely boring, and that the story could do without... are Jessie, Pamela, Sarah, and Marie. They all either seem like replicates of each other, too disdainful, too overdone and stereotypical.
Girls who I'd love to stay purely to keep the story interesting: Emily and Katherine! Come on, these are the girls you love to hate. They are the kinds of characters that keep the story interesting, without them- everyone is just bland and getting along.
5UisukiiinyoursleepBrilliant premise for a story! A bit satirical, and I love how it reflects on the reality-tv phenomenom. I've already picked out favorites!
Stay: *I love love love Lyda! She's my favorite. I love how unaffected she seems, non-judgemental and just pure cheer, friendly, and considerate.
*I also liked Alexandra- I can see her being the unintentional comic relief in the story.
*I love the idea of Misty's character; clingy and TMI- a great set-up for lots of awkward/embarrassing situations (without her realizing it), and just another good comic relief character... she also seems genuine.
*Danielle. I liked her, she's very mysterious to me, and seems to have a lot of depth. I want to know more about her character, and she outshines the other "I'm too good and intelligent for this" girls.
*Lastly, I really liked Courtney. I like her purely because I think it's be hilarious if she's in this reality show designed to win a Duke, but instead can't help going for the hot cameraman! Pure genius.
Girls who I found extremely boring, and that the story could do without... are Jessie, Pamela, Sarah, and Marie. They all either seem like replicates of each other, too disdainful, too overdone and stereotypical.
Girls who I'd love to stay purely to keep the story interesting: Emily and Katherine! Come on, these are the girls you love to hate. They are the kinds of characters that keep the story interesting, without them- everyone is just bland and getting along.
8/8/2006 c3 murphy1086
I like this story. Ethan seems to me to be a genuine character, which is a lot different than what I've seen on most of fp. Can't wait for another chapter.
I like this story. Ethan seems to me to be a genuine character, which is a lot different than what I've seen on most of fp. Can't wait for another chapter.
7/23/2006 c1 your harbor
Mmkay. So - I was drawn to your story by the amazing plot written. Although it isn't yet going to be added to my favorites I just have to say that I enjoyed reading it, and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes... at least not any to distract me from the story.
Mmkay. So - I was drawn to your story by the amazing plot written. Although it isn't yet going to be added to my favorites I just have to say that I enjoyed reading it, and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes... at least not any to distract me from the story.