for American Duchess3/22/2006 c1 sakurachan101
dude! i luv ur new story/show! very original! i'll definately be following the story, and vote ppl off and stuff... but after Ethan meets ALL the girls, of course... ti he
dude! i luv ur new story/show! very original! i'll definately be following the story, and vote ppl off and stuff... but after Ethan meets ALL the girls, of course... ti he
3/22/2006 c1 lilsakura
il ike this! new concept, interactive. :)
i noticed a mistake here:
“We’re a dieing breed.”
it should be dying
i interested to see how this will play out (btw i love how the writer is the one w/ occasional mood swings to the darker side ^_^)
il ike this! new concept, interactive. :)
i noticed a mistake here:
“We’re a dieing breed.”
it should be dying
i interested to see how this will play out (btw i love how the writer is the one w/ occasional mood swings to the darker side ^_^)
3/22/2006 c1 chelsea
amazing
amazing
3/21/2006 c1 violet sunset
Do I sense some similarities between...no, must be my imagination ;)Luv you, Tess :-D~L~
Do I sense some similarities between...no, must be my imagination ;)Luv you, Tess :-D~L~
3/20/2006 c1 
4Sing With The Elevator Music
sounds good so far cant wait to read more... and i hope it doesnt get too dirty, oh and GREAT idea!
Winter
4Sing With The Elevator Musicsounds good so far cant wait to read more... and i hope it doesnt get too dirty, oh and GREAT idea!
Winter
3/20/2006 c1 shadowgirl618
ooh! wow this is such a great idea. it's a brilliant way to receive reviews (which of course boost the ego much) and involve the readers of the story! i love this idea :P brilliant! OK i say brilliant too much..
i love how this story has started out! i'm not sure how i'll be able to keep up with so many characters, but hopefully the involvement in the story will help me! :) keep up the good work! i can't wait to see where this goes :P
-shadowgirl618-
ooh! wow this is such a great idea. it's a brilliant way to receive reviews (which of course boost the ego much) and involve the readers of the story! i love this idea :P brilliant! OK i say brilliant too much..
i love how this story has started out! i'm not sure how i'll be able to keep up with so many characters, but hopefully the involvement in the story will help me! :) keep up the good work! i can't wait to see where this goes :P
-shadowgirl618-
3/19/2006 c1 18Mockingbirdflyaway
Interesting and funny concept, but I've noticed something... all the girls are white from the looks of it. Considering America is 'The melting pot'... I think it'd be more interesting if there were some more varying backgrounds, don't you? It'd add more tensions, among other things.
18MockingbirdflyawayInteresting and funny concept, but I've noticed something... all the girls are white from the looks of it. Considering America is 'The melting pot'... I think it'd be more interesting if there were some more varying backgrounds, don't you? It'd add more tensions, among other things.
3/19/2006 c1 4bringmayflowers
I am so excited. Woot now I can't wait until Saturday. I've seen this done before and it's been pretty crappy so I am hoping you'll do it well.
Ethan sounds cute.
Alsoo...what ever happened with Jadrien and Rebecca from your other story? I know it's done but weren't you considering editing it as well as writing a story about a minor character?
Please inform me/us.
Love,Silver Eyed
4bringmayflowersI am so excited. Woot now I can't wait until Saturday. I've seen this done before and it's been pretty crappy so I am hoping you'll do it well.
Ethan sounds cute.
Alsoo...what ever happened with Jadrien and Rebecca from your other story? I know it's done but weren't you considering editing it as well as writing a story about a minor character?
Please inform me/us.
Love,Silver Eyed
3/19/2006 c1 awaiting impatient person
Ooh, sounds fun. I can't wait until the next installment. Really have fun with it, and I'm sure that everyone else will too.
Ooh, sounds fun. I can't wait until the next installment. Really have fun with it, and I'm sure that everyone else will too.
3/19/2006 c1 Kel
You should tell us more about Ethan!And by the way, update all ur other stuff! (Esp the one about Tut)
You should tell us more about Ethan!And by the way, update all ur other stuff! (Esp the one about Tut)
3/19/2006 c1 22Isis of Egypt
I have a feeling this shall prove to be interesting. We shall see.
Keep up the good work!
22Isis of EgyptI have a feeling this shall prove to be interesting. We shall see.
Keep up the good work!
3/19/2006 c1 7yarrowicefrost
WOW, that was an amazing first chapter!
I especially liked the dialouge b/e ethan and his mum. Poor Ethan though...being talked into it and all.
Update soon, coz I can't wait to read more!
7yarrowicefrostWOW, that was an amazing first chapter!
I especially liked the dialouge b/e ethan and his mum. Poor Ethan though...being talked into it and all.
Update soon, coz I can't wait to read more!
3/19/2006 c1 4Stylo
Wow.
Now this is one of the msot original stories I've ever come across. Now that you've got the plot, I'm seriously banking on you to deliver!
When I checked my mail and saw the summary of the story, I was kinda confused. It didn't seem to work out - I mean, I was wondering how the readers would just vote them off, and how you'd manage to work with a character you didnt like if she was one of the chosen few. What I'm really interested in knowing is whether they'll actually be in love with him. If so much depends on the readers, and if they choose a real looser[or rather, if WE] will Ethan and LoserGirl break up? The possibilities and boundless!
I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait!
Oh! You need a catchprase that'll end each episode. Kinda like "Seacrest, out," only less annoying. One of those things with the "will she"s and "won't she"s and "will he" and "what does she mean" and so on and so forth and then the "tune in next week" thingamajiggie!
Gosh, I sound so ditzy.
But seriously, I can't wait! I'll be looking forward to Saturdays so much! I love you writers who have weekly installments. :)
I'm glad to see a new story that's actually promising!
I'm looking forward to next Saturday!
-Bambam
4StyloWow.
Now this is one of the msot original stories I've ever come across. Now that you've got the plot, I'm seriously banking on you to deliver!
When I checked my mail and saw the summary of the story, I was kinda confused. It didn't seem to work out - I mean, I was wondering how the readers would just vote them off, and how you'd manage to work with a character you didnt like if she was one of the chosen few. What I'm really interested in knowing is whether they'll actually be in love with him. If so much depends on the readers, and if they choose a real looser[or rather, if WE] will Ethan and LoserGirl break up? The possibilities and boundless!
I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait!
Oh! You need a catchprase that'll end each episode. Kinda like "Seacrest, out," only less annoying. One of those things with the "will she"s and "won't she"s and "will he" and "what does she mean" and so on and so forth and then the "tune in next week" thingamajiggie!
Gosh, I sound so ditzy.
But seriously, I can't wait! I'll be looking forward to Saturdays so much! I love you writers who have weekly installments. :)
I'm glad to see a new story that's actually promising!
I'm looking forward to next Saturday!
-Bambam
3/18/2006 c1 1starvednsl33py
oh friggin sweet. i'm definitely sticking to this story =) you're awesome.
i vote out the trophy wife...she doesn't seem like she'll do much for the story other than sabotage and whine.
1starvednsl33pyoh friggin sweet. i'm definitely sticking to this story =) you're awesome.
i vote out the trophy wife...she doesn't seem like she'll do much for the story other than sabotage and whine.