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58White Tea and Ginger
M, so beautiful. I love- "He folds me up like a letter in an envelope,/waiting to send me somewhere foreign and exotic -"
Delicious.
And "broken sunlight", what a beautiful image.
Keep writing, you don't update often enough! I need more!
58White Tea and GingerM, so beautiful. I love- "He folds me up like a letter in an envelope,/waiting to send me somewhere foreign and exotic -"
Delicious.
And "broken sunlight", what a beautiful image.
Keep writing, you don't update often enough! I need more!
3/18/2006 c1 crazy dog events
Gorgeous. I loved the first two lines best, for some reason, but the whole thing was great.
-pictographic.love
Gorgeous. I loved the first two lines best, for some reason, but the whole thing was great.
-pictographic.love
3/18/2006 c1 69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
"waiting to send me somewhere foreign and exotic-"
I love that line. Your descriptions (smokey like..., light drizzle, earthy, homely, broken sunlight...) All is perfect for this poem.
69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton"waiting to send me somewhere foreign and exotic-"
I love that line. Your descriptions (smokey like..., light drizzle, earthy, homely, broken sunlight...) All is perfect for this poem.
3/18/2006 c1 127Eirien
Aw, so sweet. The image of the envelope is wonderful, very ingenious. Great poem.
127EirienAw, so sweet. The image of the envelope is wonderful, very ingenious. Great poem.
3/18/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Oh this is good. I love the feeling, it's just warm and comforting. Good work. :)
11les petits bateauxOh this is good. I love the feeling, it's just warm and comforting. Good work. :)
3/18/2006 c1 4KristyASoroka
Pretty good,but you should keep in mind that every first letter in a line should be capitalized.
4KristyASorokaPretty good,but you should keep in mind that every first letter in a line should be capitalized.