for When I Met You3/19/2006 c1 
5peripheral
It sounds pretty atypical to most relationships I've heard about... but I was confused by the change from 3rd to 1st person in the beginning of the essay.
5peripheralIt sounds pretty atypical to most relationships I've heard about... but I was confused by the change from 3rd to 1st person in the beginning of the essay.
3/18/2006 c1 9Ginny Jake
I thought it was well written. I think that most girls can relate to your story because everyone has their first heartbreak that they think they'll never get over.
9Ginny JakeI thought it was well written. I think that most girls can relate to your story because everyone has their first heartbreak that they think they'll never get over.
3/18/2006 c1 ode to a firefly
I found my "true love" in the 6th grade, and here I am almost 6 years later, still just as in love with him as I was then. =) Of course, my situation wasn't as dramatic or anything like that, but that's fine with me! This was relatively well-written with no visible errors and great voice. Nice job! *thumbs up*
~Christine~
I found my "true love" in the 6th grade, and here I am almost 6 years later, still just as in love with him as I was then. =) Of course, my situation wasn't as dramatic or anything like that, but that's fine with me! This was relatively well-written with no visible errors and great voice. Nice job! *thumbs up*
~Christine~