for The Question4/20/2006 c1 
35Daffodil Elizabeth
This was very well written. The poem so accurately describes a vast majority of teens that feel that they don't belong that it is nearly universal. It's universal, yet personal - a trait that one can't find often.
By the way, I think my poem 'Fall' was inspired by an essay that someone had written about the improbibility of Romeo and Juliet ever having been in love. I read 'Are You Really In Love' and I found that it was quite similar!
35Daffodil ElizabethThis was very well written. The poem so accurately describes a vast majority of teens that feel that they don't belong that it is nearly universal. It's universal, yet personal - a trait that one can't find often.
By the way, I think my poem 'Fall' was inspired by an essay that someone had written about the improbibility of Romeo and Juliet ever having been in love. I read 'Are You Really In Love' and I found that it was quite similar!
3/23/2006 c1 33Aurora Barrett
This is full of emotion and I can identify with the feelings you speak of, b/c I've been there before, but I want you to know it doesn't have to be that way.
If you read through the things I've written, you'll see a subtle up and down in mood... But things will get better in the end, and you'll see that in the end - rain falls on everyone.
}i{ Aurora }i{
33Aurora BarrettThis is full of emotion and I can identify with the feelings you speak of, b/c I've been there before, but I want you to know it doesn't have to be that way.
If you read through the things I've written, you'll see a subtle up and down in mood... But things will get better in the end, and you'll see that in the end - rain falls on everyone.
}i{ Aurora }i{
3/19/2006 c1 511NothingMoreNothingLess
Simple, but it gets the point across. I think I've heard those questions before... oh right, I ask them to myself everyday. Great Job!
Cassandra
511NothingMoreNothingLessSimple, but it gets the point across. I think I've heard those questions before... oh right, I ask them to myself everyday. Great Job!
Cassandra
3/18/2006 c1 54FlameintheFlood
it describes the feeling of not knowing very well. i dont really like the last line. i had a hard time relating to it. but it helped me understand ppl who wanna fit in and be normal. i dont like normal. so don't sweat it if ur not. thanx.
54FlameintheFloodit describes the feeling of not knowing very well. i dont really like the last line. i had a hard time relating to it. but it helped me understand ppl who wanna fit in and be normal. i dont like normal. so don't sweat it if ur not. thanx.
3/18/2006 c1 4Knightmare Elite
It's rather strange as simply as that was written it really spoke to me. I can really relate to what you're saying. I've felt that way for years and still do. It's a hard situation many young people are face with, when society forces you to be the newest fad, or just something that is socially accepted. It's hard to blend in when you don't fit in. Very well done.
4Knightmare EliteIt's rather strange as simply as that was written it really spoke to me. I can really relate to what you're saying. I've felt that way for years and still do. It's a hard situation many young people are face with, when society forces you to be the newest fad, or just something that is socially accepted. It's hard to blend in when you don't fit in. Very well done.
3/18/2006 c1 42Anecdotes Of The Arcane
another beautiful piece. sounds like something i'd write - actually, something i have already written. Keep up the good work, hope to see more soon.
42Anecdotes Of The Arcaneanother beautiful piece. sounds like something i'd write - actually, something i have already written. Keep up the good work, hope to see more soon.