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7/16/2013 c8 cassiealan34
9/17/2012 c27 AnonymousReads
Please Update Soon
1/10/2012 c27 1violet-eyez
can't wait for the next chapter
1/3/2011 c1 sugartox
This story is definitely worth a read. What's not to love about a story that involves music and romance? I'm fighting the urge to ask for an update, though I'll really love to see more of the story soon :D Thanks for the story!
6/10/2010 c1 4CorvaCarolina
It's always good to see true band-related fiction, not fanfics in disguise. Compelling story, hope you're still updating this!
4/27/2010 c26 5Oyuki
ok so now they're friends. i agree that things went too far too fast. but will this help them any? i still don't like anne. i think she got rid of lorelei too easily. and i understand that ron doesn't want his wife hurt but getting angry that she was paying attention to a daughter she's never met before really pisses me off. what? she's supposed to not ask question and focus on her daughter that she's never talked to or known before. she's had a lifetime with her other children but lorelei is a mystery. in fact, i think ron should be giving anne and lorelei space to get to know each other. not sit there and supervise their meeting. *sigh* can't wait for more. please have it soon, k?
3/25/2010 c26 3blonski
I find it amazing this story doesn't have over a thousand reviews. I absolutely love it. :)
3/6/2010 c26 Minzy
Yes, GO CANADA! Hahaha
3/2/2010 c26 29Amused Bookworm
I am just excited to read what you write... and the updates work right in to my schedule. :)
3/2/2010 c26 pinkeclipse
thanks so much for the update! I hope she fights for what she wants!
1/18/2010 c25 5Oyuki
and that's her problem. she said the words and she can't deal with them or when someone says it to her, so she leaves. *sigh* what will happen? more soon!
1/9/2010 c25 13Aaerie
oh my god plz hurry with the nxt chapter i cant take it i need to noe wat happens
1/5/2010 c25 1kareena
So I just read both of your Obsidian Empire stories in one go, pretty much. And I think they're awesome! I loved In the Shadow. Kaitlyn was a totally awesome character. Cindy was a bitch and her parents were ridiculous. I wanted to kill Karen. Ohh she mad me so mad. But yeah, I thought the story was awesome!

I like how this story is about Jason because I was kinda iffy about him in your first story and I feel like this explains a lot about him. He's so cute. He and Lorelei are both so awkward with each other and it's super frustrating but I love it anyway! Anyway, I'm glad that you're still writing despite your dislike for the characters. I can totally understand that because both Lorelei and Jason seem like such complex characters. They both have a lot of history and I can see how it's difficult to find the right voice for both of them. But I think you're doing a stellar job! And I can't wait to see what happens next. Especially since she just dropped "i love you."
12/31/2009 c25 4Nocive
So many twists and turns in this story! I cannot deal with not knowing how it's going to end.

I feel this desperate need for Lorelei to end up with Drew. I seriously feel like I need it... as if I won't be complete if she ends up with anyone else. Okay... that was dramatic but seriously, this story is really good and can evoke that kind of emotion.

Jason seems like the obvious choice, and he is a sweetie and he didn't deserve to be hurt like that but, my goodness, Drew is the love of her life... just like Jason said. I don't know why I feel this pull toward him. I hope it was created intentionally as a sign that they will be together... because I seriously might cry.

Other than that, I don't like Kait or Ash. They do this superiority thing that makes me want to punch them in their guitars... or just Ash's... twice. I can't stand that Lennon and Lor don't love each other and my heart breaks every time i think about how much Matt wants Lor and drew together(this might be a fabrication of my mind but I don't care. I'm a brat and I want them together!)... they belong together!

As for the band... well... I don't actually like too many of them very much(as stated many times... I'm team Drew) but I absolutely feel sorry for Paiton... I like her and her brother isn't bad either(that and the fact that i believe shes perfect for Jason). As for josh... Okay I have a thing for gay people(which led to my automatic love for Iain and Benji) so... I love josh a little bit. And Emily is alright too... haha.

Hell, the fact that i can even remember that many characters to be able to comment on them is enough to say that I love this story!

I cannot wait for the next update!

- Alex
12/31/2009 c25 29Amused Bookworm
You rock hard core for continuing even when faced with disliking the characters. :) Thank you and HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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