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for Dusk's Eternal Embrace

3/21/2006 c1 21EnemyWithin
Very nice, and very dark. Great rhythm and flow, and a good rhyming scheme. I do think the last line should be reworded into two lines, but other than that it had dark, surreal imagery and detail, a brilliant description of the apocalypse.

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