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12/8/2008 c1 3Big Boots Man Of War
Hmm, this was amusing. I liked the torture-ness.

I especially liked the very yr 7 graffitti, Sindhlot was here.

nice job!
3/18/2007 c1 jccrazy
You kind of throw your reader into the plot without much information. It would have probably been better with some character development. You sentences don't flow really well together.

Grammar-wise and content-wise, you seem to be doing ok.
2/22/2007 c1 erilev
that was pretty cool, although not as gory as I would like. You say you did ths for class? What did everyone think of it?
11/24/2006 c1 CorruptGuardian
It's alright, but I beleive the sentances could flow better. Other than that, it's quite good.
7/16/2006 c1 JaveHarron
I love Sindhlot!

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