3/27/2006 c1 12lxpetrik
What a useless observation! Funny, but useless.
I think if you had any other reason for putting this up besides humor, I would suggest you smooth this over. Compared to your other writing I find this to be a little dry and uninterresting. On the other hand, my friend finds it amusing in a corky sort of way and laughed. Maybe I'm just being too analytical.
What a useless observation! Funny, but useless.
I think if you had any other reason for putting this up besides humor, I would suggest you smooth this over. Compared to your other writing I find this to be a little dry and uninterresting. On the other hand, my friend finds it amusing in a corky sort of way and laughed. Maybe I'm just being too analytical.
3/22/2006 c1 19Jason J. Ross
You have good observation skills. Another person might have never made the connection. Keep writing!
You have good observation skills. Another person might have never made the connection. Keep writing!