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5/27/2006 c1 34mylittlechangingtruths
hmm.. i likey. your descriptions are awesome; you capture the emotion, not just the... well.. sex. thanks for your review of The Colors Underneath!
5/27/2006 c1 83White is a Sin
ah i like this...weird that you wrote about that...but good description and stuff. Thnx for the review ^_^ Much appreciated. I agree with that other girl GRAMMER IS THE KEY! (not shouting) though that's why i don't use full stops and commas very often...*.*
5/25/2006 c1 sundaynightsky
thanks for your comment, it is interesting to read and i will take on board what you said. this piece is worded well, but needs punctuation to help the flow a bit.thnx.
3/22/2006 c1 4run rabbit run
woah! that was intense. well-done.cheers-rabbit

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