for Burn Me Tender3/28/2006 c1 
26My New Pen Name
Beautiful, your imagery is great! I'm impressed. You have a typo: "in" instead of "is" in the first line. Otherwise, it's great. Oh, and I like the format. . . Great! : D
26My New Pen NameBeautiful, your imagery is great! I'm impressed. You have a typo: "in" instead of "is" in the first line. Otherwise, it's great. Oh, and I like the format. . . Great! : D
3/23/2006 c1 a lonely september
this is so. . . different. havent read anything along these lines before, it's amazing. you did an awesome job with this.
this is so. . . different. havent read anything along these lines before, it's amazing. you did an awesome job with this.