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3/28/2006 c1 23Sweetly Sarcastic
it's got great descriptions, but honestly, you could do much better than just a short poem- this could easily be a longerr poem that explains exactly why that sorrow is there, and if the narrator somehow caused it indirectly or directly.

it's still good- short and sweet
3/22/2006 c1 crazy dog events
Gorgeous. Short and sweet.

-pictographic.loe
3/22/2006 c1 12eighteen hundred
This is cool. I don't usually like metered stuff, I guess is what you'd call this...? Yeah. But this is good, I like it.

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