
7/6/2007 c1 silently watching
u sound emo. dunno if u r, its not an insult, dont wry!
nice poem...well not necesarrily nice, but well-written
silently watching
u sound emo. dunno if u r, its not an insult, dont wry!
nice poem...well not necesarrily nice, but well-written
silently watching
3/22/2006 c1
5Drops of Jewpiter
this is def. twisted, but i like it. i love how you add up all the adj. at the end of the poem- it's a unique structure. also, i love the line 'you eat the flesh of the dead' it kinda makes me wana throw up, but that's a good thing b/c it means you can create emotion ;) great job
~dropsofjewpiter~

this is def. twisted, but i like it. i love how you add up all the adj. at the end of the poem- it's a unique structure. also, i love the line 'you eat the flesh of the dead' it kinda makes me wana throw up, but that's a good thing b/c it means you can create emotion ;) great job
~dropsofjewpiter~