for somewhere in between1/12/2007 c1 
2beyond.that.horizon
ohmygod.
give me your writing skills, bitch.
seriously, though.
i think i forgot how to breathe while reading this.
ohmygod.
marry me?
just kidding.
i'm taken and not lesbian.
don't worry, though.
i still love you.
2beyond.that.horizonohmygod.
give me your writing skills, bitch.
seriously, though.
i think i forgot how to breathe while reading this.
ohmygod.
marry me?
just kidding.
i'm taken and not lesbian.
don't worry, though.
i still love you.
4/25/2006 c1 26My New Pen Name
Exceptionally well-done. It's easy to destroy a subject like this or to just do it badly, but you made it prefect. Excellent imagery. I love it!
26My New Pen NameExceptionally well-done. It's easy to destroy a subject like this or to just do it badly, but you made it prefect. Excellent imagery. I love it!
4/10/2006 c1 65dancingintherain
you creativity is just bursting with gorgeous imagery! your words just really put me there and i get those feelings and see things and feel things...and then at the end you always have that punch that really sends across the emotion and message you wanted to convey- this one was so bittersweet yet so romantic...nice job!
65dancingintherainyou creativity is just bursting with gorgeous imagery! your words just really put me there and i get those feelings and see things and feel things...and then at the end you always have that punch that really sends across the emotion and message you wanted to convey- this one was so bittersweet yet so romantic...nice job!
4/2/2006 c1 131theory of black
This reminds me of "Anyone lived in a pretty how town" by E.E. Cummings. I liked it, good job.
131theory of blackThis reminds me of "Anyone lived in a pretty how town" by E.E. Cummings. I liked it, good job.
3/28/2006 c1 4run rabbit run
awesome run through the seasons of romance (thinks of flowers of romance by PiL for a moment) really cool. -rabbit
4run rabbit runawesome run through the seasons of romance (thinks of flowers of romance by PiL for a moment) really cool. -rabbit
3/28/2006 c1 12eighteen hundred
I like this; the first half-ish especially. It has a good feel to it, it's nice to read. Neat.
12eighteen hundredI like this; the first half-ish especially. It has a good feel to it, it's nice to read. Neat.
3/27/2006 c1 236mezzie
SHUTUP i'm so completely jealous of this poem. i want it. you are very very close to provoking me out of unwriteful mental stagnancy.. keep it up : )
gah... and can you shake the boy next to me for me too and tell him to love me?will continue to return for more of this positive mental provocation. *thankyou* meant most sincerely.
mezzie
236mezzieSHUTUP i'm so completely jealous of this poem. i want it. you are very very close to provoking me out of unwriteful mental stagnancy.. keep it up : )
gah... and can you shake the boy next to me for me too and tell him to love me?will continue to return for more of this positive mental provocation. *thankyou* meant most sincerely.
mezzie
3/27/2006 c1 47coldsunlight
i think i'm in love with this.
it reminds me of jets to brazil, i do believe, for some reason. maybe i'm just weird like that.
that's a very good thing in my book, by the way.
kudos. times two.
47coldsunlighti think i'm in love with this.
it reminds me of jets to brazil, i do believe, for some reason. maybe i'm just weird like that.
that's a very good thing in my book, by the way.
kudos. times two.
3/26/2006 c1 219Matthew James Current
You are a unique and wonderful poet. Thank you for sharing yourself with all of us here on FPC. I love this piece and your style. Truly I hope that you respect my work as much as I respect yours. For then I shall know that I have earned the respect of a great poet.
I can't really review your work, just bask in its beauty.
219Matthew James CurrentYou are a unique and wonderful poet. Thank you for sharing yourself with all of us here on FPC. I love this piece and your style. Truly I hope that you respect my work as much as I respect yours. For then I shall know that I have earned the respect of a great poet.
I can't really review your work, just bask in its beauty.
3/25/2006 c1 22Lucid Nonsense
Beautiful. I love the occasional rhyme, imagery, and how it subtly progressed through the seasons. Great job.
22Lucid NonsenseBeautiful. I love the occasional rhyme, imagery, and how it subtly progressed through the seasons. Great job.
3/23/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
wow so pretty. breathtaking imagery. i can't chose between which lines i liked better - they were all great!
wow so pretty. breathtaking imagery. i can't chose between which lines i liked better - they were all great!
3/23/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This evokes a wonderful tenderness in the scenes. The flashes of connection really enhance the whole situation. Excellent descriptions and specific details. Great write.
879Moondog DozierThis evokes a wonderful tenderness in the scenes. The flashes of connection really enhance the whole situation. Excellent descriptions and specific details. Great write.