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3/30/2006 c1 6moondocc
wow, this is a really good poem =)yay you updateD1
3/24/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Love the concept, very beautiful indeed. Your endings are just brilliant.
3/24/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
The format of this poem is really good for the subject of the poem! I enjoyed reading this! ^_^ Good work, keep writing (and thanks for your review!)

~Anna~ ^_^
3/24/2006 c1 48chocohound
I like it. The style really worked and brought you into the mindset of the poem.
3/23/2006 c1 124in theory
I amire the formatting choice here, the conscious stream of thought drags the reader in effortlessly. It drips. And the parts in quotation marks are juicy, beautiul choice.
3/23/2006 c1 31K.D. Wagner
Unique Style, but wonderful.

Thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome work!

-Kait

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