for The Crave for Mistakes4/24/2006 c12 hi
Heheh. Cute.
Heheh. Cute.
4/24/2006 c12 
4Lindsay Marie
Aw he kissed her. You know you're going to have to update asap! That was sweet that he was her first. Please post more soon! Great chapter!
4Lindsay MarieAw he kissed her. You know you're going to have to update asap! That was sweet that he was her first. Please post more soon! Great chapter!
4/22/2006 c11 5tearitrightup
i LOVE this chapter...and i love your author's note. for some weird reason, it made me laugh really hard...
5tearitrightupi LOVE this chapter...and i love your author's note. for some weird reason, it made me laugh really hard...
4/22/2006 c11 15Idiot Pilot
I liked this chapter, but she read off the slip and it said "kiss the opposite sex on the mouth", and then two girls kissed, so it should have said "kiss the same sex on the mouth".
15Idiot PilotI liked this chapter, but she read off the slip and it said "kiss the opposite sex on the mouth", and then two girls kissed, so it should have said "kiss the same sex on the mouth".
4/22/2006 c11 chelchang
I like it, a few errors, but your story is really coming together, keep it up.
-chel_chang/koitenchi
I like it, a few errors, but your story is really coming together, keep it up.
-chel_chang/koitenchi
4/22/2006 c11 17Lady of romance world88
Hey! Poor Selene. I wonder what will Ben choose? Truth or Dare? Anyway i understand why Selene dont choose to drink it because of mistake she done with Ben is she? Hurry update soon.
17Lady of romance world88Hey! Poor Selene. I wonder what will Ben choose? Truth or Dare? Anyway i understand why Selene dont choose to drink it because of mistake she done with Ben is she? Hurry update soon.
4/21/2006 c11 4Morgan Davis
oh dear god. . . he is going to do something really stupid now isnt he. . . well whether he does or not is totally up to you! *wink wink* lol (there is no way i could change it anyway) but man it sounds good! hurry and update! i'm really loving this! and just a tip: try not to make chapters too short cuz this tends to break off the thought process and we subconsciously add time in between them. for cliffies like this one it works but sometimes you just pick up a thread right after it was cut and readers tend to think it's a completely new thread, especially since there actually is usually a waiting period. if you want to keep the updates small then you can break the chapters into parts (Chapter 1a, Chapter 1b. . .etc) ok well good job so far! keep it up! ! !
4Morgan Davisoh dear god. . . he is going to do something really stupid now isnt he. . . well whether he does or not is totally up to you! *wink wink* lol (there is no way i could change it anyway) but man it sounds good! hurry and update! i'm really loving this! and just a tip: try not to make chapters too short cuz this tends to break off the thought process and we subconsciously add time in between them. for cliffies like this one it works but sometimes you just pick up a thread right after it was cut and readers tend to think it's a completely new thread, especially since there actually is usually a waiting period. if you want to keep the updates small then you can break the chapters into parts (Chapter 1a, Chapter 1b. . .etc) ok well good job so far! keep it up! ! !
4/21/2006 c1 bluz
This look like the begining of a good story. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.
This look like the begining of a good story. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.
4/21/2006 c11 anonymous
I love it! please update soon, I really want to know what happens in the truth or dare game! keep up the good work!
I love it! please update soon, I really want to know what happens in the truth or dare game! keep up the good work!
4/21/2006 c11 dee
im excited for the next chapter! the truth and dare sounded like fun. ;P
im excited for the next chapter! the truth and dare sounded like fun. ;P
4/21/2006 c11 samantha
oh! cant wait for the next chapter;) put it up asap!
oh! cant wait for the next chapter;) put it up asap!
4/21/2006 c11 4Lindsay Marie
I was so excited to see that you updated! The chapter was great. Please update more soon. Oh, and I thought the detail was good in this chapter. What I meant though is that sometimes I think you rush through the chapters, and if you added a little more detail about what was going on, we'd be able to understand the characters better. I want to know more about what Ben and Selene are feeling. Great chapter though!
4Lindsay MarieI was so excited to see that you updated! The chapter was great. Please update more soon. Oh, and I thought the detail was good in this chapter. What I meant though is that sometimes I think you rush through the chapters, and if you added a little more detail about what was going on, we'd be able to understand the characters better. I want to know more about what Ben and Selene are feeling. Great chapter though!
4/19/2006 c10 10Kasey Renae
Awesome chapter chickie! Sorry the review is so late! I hope you update soon :D
10Kasey RenaeAwesome chapter chickie! Sorry the review is so late! I hope you update soon :D