
6/14/2006 c1 TruMagick
This is officially one of my favorite poems that I have ever read. "Roll over, play dead" "soon comes the end" "drenched in sorrow" Your phrases are masterful and thought-provoking. I am still fascinated.
This is officially one of my favorite poems that I have ever read. "Roll over, play dead" "soon comes the end" "drenched in sorrow" Your phrases are masterful and thought-provoking. I am still fascinated.
3/23/2006 c1
5Drops of Jewpiter
awesome poem. i love your writing style, like the lines 'roll over; play dead' and 'as silently the birds sing' great job :)
~dropsofjewpiter~

awesome poem. i love your writing style, like the lines 'roll over; play dead' and 'as silently the birds sing' great job :)
~dropsofjewpiter~