3/23/2006 c1 archived
wow, great descriptive writing. I really liked it. harmonica = Bob Dylan, perhaps? That's what I was thinking, but it could be somebody else. Again, really great writing. Good job.
-L-
wow, great descriptive writing. I really liked it. harmonica = Bob Dylan, perhaps? That's what I was thinking, but it could be somebody else. Again, really great writing. Good job.
-L-
3/23/2006 c1 20wodneythewat
good job on this! you did a great job describing how "he seems oblivious to distractions". :)
good job on this! you did a great job describing how "he seems oblivious to distractions". :)