for Synopsis of Dreams3/24/2006 c1 
87youzi
i like the choice of subject...it's very intriguing and you've done a good job exploring it in the poem.I also admire the discipline with which you keep to neat quatrains. The use of capital letters for abstract ideas like "Conscious Mind" gives them strange importance and substance. This is, i suppose, a good alternative to colourful descriptions especially when dealing with things that cannot be pinned down. My only complain is the somewhat dry intellectuality of the piece at some points, but that's just a personal opinion! do keep writing :D
87youzii like the choice of subject...it's very intriguing and you've done a good job exploring it in the poem.I also admire the discipline with which you keep to neat quatrains. The use of capital letters for abstract ideas like "Conscious Mind" gives them strange importance and substance. This is, i suppose, a good alternative to colourful descriptions especially when dealing with things that cannot be pinned down. My only complain is the somewhat dry intellectuality of the piece at some points, but that's just a personal opinion! do keep writing :D
3/23/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
I like how this speaks of dreams and the depths that they come from. The detail is wonderful, as it presents a variety in how dreams form through different means. Well written. Very comprehensive. Good work.
879Moondog DozierI like how this speaks of dreams and the depths that they come from. The detail is wonderful, as it presents a variety in how dreams form through different means. Well written. Very comprehensive. Good work.