
3/24/2006 c1 dark stars grace
yikes, sounds creepy! nice job with the imaging though, it made me cringe.
yikes, sounds creepy! nice job with the imaging though, it made me cringe.
3/24/2006 c1
879Moondog Dozier
Interestingly vivid. I like the open ended possibility that you've given the character. Good haiku.

Interestingly vivid. I like the open ended possibility that you've given the character. Good haiku.