for Mirror, Mirror8/7/2012 c1 
44MissEscapist
Very beatiful, yet very tragic. It's hard when you don't like the person starring back at you from the mirror. You did a great job of potraying the feeling. Simple yet deep. Keep up the great work.
MissEscapist
44MissEscapistVery beatiful, yet very tragic. It's hard when you don't like the person starring back at you from the mirror. You did a great job of potraying the feeling. Simple yet deep. Keep up the great work.
MissEscapist
4/26/2006 c1 34Ethereal Kisses
Hey,
Thanks so much for giving me those reviews ... sorry it took so long for their return! (Droops head in shame)
Anyway, my god this one was good. I always feel so unworthy when I read something just so powerful as this poem is. The idea of a girl looking in a mirror and seeing only despair and helplessness ... touches something deep inside. So many of us have been there. I especially love the way there's subtle rhyming in the last lines - "I can’t help her. Taking one last glance at her,I turn away from the mirror."
Simple, yet perfect.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
34Ethereal KissesHey,
Thanks so much for giving me those reviews ... sorry it took so long for their return! (Droops head in shame)
Anyway, my god this one was good. I always feel so unworthy when I read something just so powerful as this poem is. The idea of a girl looking in a mirror and seeing only despair and helplessness ... touches something deep inside. So many of us have been there. I especially love the way there's subtle rhyming in the last lines - "I can’t help her. Taking one last glance at her,I turn away from the mirror."
Simple, yet perfect.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
4/6/2006 c1 50Kristina Suko
It's good- I was expecting the mirror to be the one from which was the perspective, but I like the twist at the end.
50Kristina SukoIt's good- I was expecting the mirror to be the one from which was the perspective, but I like the twist at the end.
3/26/2006 c1 Desi Pixie
It's good. Not one of your best, Ive seen you right better. Definately a good concept, nice twist at the end. Should have seen it coming. XD
I liked it. It could use a little revision, but it is pretty good otherwise.
Be happy =D
It's good. Not one of your best, Ive seen you right better. Definately a good concept, nice twist at the end. Should have seen it coming. XD
I liked it. It could use a little revision, but it is pretty good otherwise.
Be happy =D