for Cyanide Smile4/10/2006 c1 
64not sure yet
gruesome, esp that first stanza, i really like that, tastes bitter, well done
64not sure yetgruesome, esp that first stanza, i really like that, tastes bitter, well done
4/4/2006 c1 48Vyvyan
Very well writen...brilliant. I think that you do not need to rhyme all the time; prose is perfectly fine. Once again, very well done.
48VyvyanVery well writen...brilliant. I think that you do not need to rhyme all the time; prose is perfectly fine. Once again, very well done.
3/26/2006 c1 fopldr
Good, I like the last line, how it tells that even after you did it, theres a part of you that doesn't want to, even though you know you have to. Kudos~!Nick!~
Good, I like the last line, how it tells that even after you did it, theres a part of you that doesn't want to, even though you know you have to. Kudos~!Nick!~
3/26/2006 c1 42Anecdotes Of The Arcane
wow, amazing (ok you know i suck at reviewing o_o) but i really liked it, amazing job, it works -.- full stop.
42Anecdotes Of The Arcanewow, amazing (ok you know i suck at reviewing o_o) but i really liked it, amazing job, it works -.- full stop.
3/25/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Very angsty! Quite haunting and gruesome! Well written poem. Good good! Write on!
~Anna~
81Princess-anna57Very angsty! Quite haunting and gruesome! Well written poem. Good good! Write on!
~Anna~