for under skin6/24/2006 c1 
5Whoregasmic
i love this.i love how at the end you never say what the secret is...everything just stops...great write
5Whoregasmici love this.i love how at the end you never say what the secret is...everything just stops...great write
6/6/2006 c1 73Jezsh
I adore the line 'hold your breath when I b r e a t h e'. Zowee! This is gorgeous, I love the extra spaces - the atmosphere of it is electric.
73JezshI adore the line 'hold your breath when I b r e a t h e'. Zowee! This is gorgeous, I love the extra spaces - the atmosphere of it is electric.
5/17/2006 c1 90oops heartbreak
Hey, I'm just reviewing to apoligize for assuming you had an eating disorder. Thanks for explaining it to me, but I guess the reason I really saw it was, well, because when you have an ED, you look for a sense of solidarity everywhere, you know? It's weird, I guess, it's just something I tend to do...
Anyway, this poem was really amazing. They're always so well worded, and formatted, and the flow is always amazing. You've got an amazing talent.
Thanks,Pumpkin
90oops heartbreakHey, I'm just reviewing to apoligize for assuming you had an eating disorder. Thanks for explaining it to me, but I guess the reason I really saw it was, well, because when you have an ED, you look for a sense of solidarity everywhere, you know? It's weird, I guess, it's just something I tend to do...
Anyway, this poem was really amazing. They're always so well worded, and formatted, and the flow is always amazing. You've got an amazing talent.
Thanks,Pumpkin
4/2/2006 c1 account not in use
I do this to much, your brilliant idea of a poem, insert your own secret, and you let us, right after that -is- but i only ever get that far, the words freeze when the panic starts.
I do this to much, your brilliant idea of a poem, insert your own secret, and you let us, right after that -is- but i only ever get that far, the words freeze when the panic starts.
3/26/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I love how lyrical this one - like as I read it, it came so fast like a song. I love the whole divide between words written across you (like looking at a look on someone's face) and the secrets that go with it if only that part of the sentence were legible. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI love how lyrical this one - like as I read it, it came so fast like a song. I love the whole divide between words written across you (like looking at a look on someone's face) and the secrets that go with it if only that part of the sentence were legible. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
3/25/2006 c1 123dress her up in fairytales
ah, very nice. it sent chills down my spine & i love the format of this. it's beautiful work.
123dress her up in fairytalesah, very nice. it sent chills down my spine & i love the format of this. it's beautiful work.
3/25/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
nice to see you updated. and i love the mystery at the end. so pretty and flowed together so well.
nice to see you updated. and i love the mystery at the end. so pretty and flowed together so well.
3/25/2006 c1 24she's not breathing
ohmyGod. your writing is your pen name. that's all i can say. i'm speechless. wow.
~kait
24she's not breathingohmyGod. your writing is your pen name. that's all i can say. i'm speechless. wow.
~kait
3/25/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
i feel like i'm walking around in a daze while reading this. perfect ending, and snags of reality in between.
144chaos called creationi feel like i'm walking around in a daze while reading this. perfect ending, and snags of reality in between.