for Oasis7/13/2008 c5 
1Cross The Rainbow And You Die
wow this was really good. it seems like you really have the plot under control, you don't find that in a lot of stories. anyway, please update!
~Nina
1Cross The Rainbow And You Diewow this was really good. it seems like you really have the plot under control, you don't find that in a lot of stories. anyway, please update!
~Nina
10/11/2006 c5 5GASPtrinitrotoluene
you're story is realy awesome! i like Ai he is cool i dont like Iv that much because of what he did ::still annoyed at him:: but great story! i cant wait for the next chapter!
5GASPtrinitrotolueneyou're story is realy awesome! i like Ai he is cool i dont like Iv that much because of what he did ::still annoyed at him:: but great story! i cant wait for the next chapter!
10/3/2006 c5 James-St-James
Why is it so short! I want more! Much more! That's so cute! I want them to kiss though... That would make me so happy! I love it though..
-James
Why is it so short! I want more! Much more! That's so cute! I want them to kiss though... That would make me so happy! I love it though..
-James
10/2/2006 c4 James-St-James
What the hell was that?Why is it so short?
*cries*
What the hell was that?Why is it so short?
*cries*
9/29/2006 c3 James-St-James
Aw.. I hope everything is okay between them! I don't want it to be all weird.
You probably think I'm crazy for reviewing so much.. Oh well, it's a really good story! I love it!-James
Aw.. I hope everything is okay between them! I don't want it to be all weird.
You probably think I'm crazy for reviewing so much.. Oh well, it's a really good story! I love it!-James
9/29/2006 c2 James-St-James
Oh boy... That's no good... Why did you stop there? ;;... It makes me so sad! WAH!
Oh boy... That's no good... Why did you stop there? ;;... It makes me so sad! WAH!
9/28/2006 c1 James-St-James
OH MY GOD! This is soo good! I love it. By the way, this is one of the authors of August. Thanks for reading by the way. I love this so much! The only thing I didn't like was that there were four chapters on one page... Haha! It's soo good though. I love it soo much! I'm gonna move on to the next chapter now (because I'm awesome and because HTML Programming is boring). Ta-ta for now!-James
OH MY GOD! This is soo good! I love it. By the way, this is one of the authors of August. Thanks for reading by the way. I love this so much! The only thing I didn't like was that there were four chapters on one page... Haha! It's soo good though. I love it soo much! I'm gonna move on to the next chapter now (because I'm awesome and because HTML Programming is boring). Ta-ta for now!-James
8/19/2006 c5 Amour Amorita Saphira
Nice^^ That seems really easy going. So they are like in a repaitionship but still not there yet? Romance is really complicating. Been there and it's really confusing and I'm stuck with this because I've never figured out what it actually means. hehehe...=P Neways, You left poor Ken-chan. hahaha..
I didn't know that I could make you happy with what I wrote in the last chapter. I thought you wouldn't say anything about it...=P I'm glad I helped.
It's up to you actually. It's yr story. Think what's best in your way to slowly bring in the characters friends and family. I'm sure you're slowly going to add some trouble to push them closer. I hope you do remember to add the things you've left hanging like the trust with David's issue, Ai-chan doesn't believe in Ivan. You still haven't tell us why he's fustrated. Aiden was upset that he think maybe he mad Ivan mad but did he? I'm sure Aiden would bring it up,right? What was the reason that got him so fustrated that made him drink more than he usually does and most of all, is the phrase "the love of my life" a confession? See... so many cliffies and I wanna know...*pouts* hehehe =P
So remember to solve what you put up or the readers espeacially me who think alot..=P wouldn't be satisfied. But you don't nessesary have to do as I say and you know, just do the best you can and the way you think it should be and that's the reason we love you^^. It's yr story that catches thier attention. Everyone has opinions and just put our opinions into the way u want the story to be,k? hehe^^
It's a cute scene. Love it. Keep up the good work okay? Love ya, muax
Nice^^ That seems really easy going. So they are like in a repaitionship but still not there yet? Romance is really complicating. Been there and it's really confusing and I'm stuck with this because I've never figured out what it actually means. hehehe...=P Neways, You left poor Ken-chan. hahaha..
I didn't know that I could make you happy with what I wrote in the last chapter. I thought you wouldn't say anything about it...=P I'm glad I helped.
It's up to you actually. It's yr story. Think what's best in your way to slowly bring in the characters friends and family. I'm sure you're slowly going to add some trouble to push them closer. I hope you do remember to add the things you've left hanging like the trust with David's issue, Ai-chan doesn't believe in Ivan. You still haven't tell us why he's fustrated. Aiden was upset that he think maybe he mad Ivan mad but did he? I'm sure Aiden would bring it up,right? What was the reason that got him so fustrated that made him drink more than he usually does and most of all, is the phrase "the love of my life" a confession? See... so many cliffies and I wanna know...*pouts* hehehe =P
So remember to solve what you put up or the readers espeacially me who think alot..=P wouldn't be satisfied. But you don't nessesary have to do as I say and you know, just do the best you can and the way you think it should be and that's the reason we love you^^. It's yr story that catches thier attention. Everyone has opinions and just put our opinions into the way u want the story to be,k? hehe^^
It's a cute scene. Love it. Keep up the good work okay? Love ya, muax
8/18/2006 c4 Amour Amorita Saphira
Hey love, You know what? This fictionpress is having a lil' problem, I think. I haven't recieved any email's on yr 2nd and 3rd chapter and recently just recieved yr 4th chapter. I was confused as where I've read this story but thank god I remembered their names to know I've read this story before. I've just read all of the chapters and I think it's great. I love it though it is true that it is less exciting compared to the first chapter. Like as to why Ivan was mad and you know. Ken suddenly appeared and you suddenly put so much info on him. You can see that Ken treats Ai-chan as a brother but how long have they met and stuff like that are missing that the fimiliarity in the story isn't in. I think by just putting the main characters as fimiliarity characters aren't that great. There's so many nice friends and we also like to know how it's going between all of them. You seem to only put on their actions on what they see and do. Maybe if you put more details then what's going on, you know what I mean? Like it's surroundings. for eg, the begginning of yr story. That was really nice. Like I said the first chapter was the best and hope the next would be better^^ I know what it feels like when you have all the idea and you just wanna put it all in. Don't rush, take yr time and build yr story. Maybe I'm wrong, yr having writters block but oh well, just wanna tell you my opinion. Not a flame. I love this story. Please keep up the good work^^ See ya on yr next chapter.
Hey love, You know what? This fictionpress is having a lil' problem, I think. I haven't recieved any email's on yr 2nd and 3rd chapter and recently just recieved yr 4th chapter. I was confused as where I've read this story but thank god I remembered their names to know I've read this story before. I've just read all of the chapters and I think it's great. I love it though it is true that it is less exciting compared to the first chapter. Like as to why Ivan was mad and you know. Ken suddenly appeared and you suddenly put so much info on him. You can see that Ken treats Ai-chan as a brother but how long have they met and stuff like that are missing that the fimiliarity in the story isn't in. I think by just putting the main characters as fimiliarity characters aren't that great. There's so many nice friends and we also like to know how it's going between all of them. You seem to only put on their actions on what they see and do. Maybe if you put more details then what's going on, you know what I mean? Like it's surroundings. for eg, the begginning of yr story. That was really nice. Like I said the first chapter was the best and hope the next would be better^^ I know what it feels like when you have all the idea and you just wanna put it all in. Don't rush, take yr time and build yr story. Maybe I'm wrong, yr having writters block but oh well, just wanna tell you my opinion. Not a flame. I love this story. Please keep up the good work^^ See ya on yr next chapter.
8/16/2006 c5 42RieCo
Great start! I liked the drama and the resolution! Very good. Great dialogue! Are you done with the story or is there going to be more chapters? Keep it up!Always: Kiwi
42RieCoGreat start! I liked the drama and the resolution! Very good. Great dialogue! Are you done with the story or is there going to be more chapters? Keep it up!Always: Kiwi
8/11/2006 c5 13Trey Terror
nice way to end their ... "fight"? Im looking forward to future chappies ,godbless those plot bunnies in your head!*hugs**adds to favorite story*~rttm
13Trey Terrornice way to end their ... "fight"? Im looking forward to future chappies ,godbless those plot bunnies in your head!*hugs**adds to favorite story*~rttm
8/11/2006 c2 Trey Terror
I do hate writters block and I do enjoy this story... I like Aiden better than Ivan... but thats just me
*huggles and kisses*
~RTTM
I do hate writters block and I do enjoy this story... I like Aiden better than Ivan... but thats just me
*huggles and kisses*
~RTTM
8/11/2006 c1 Trey Terror
I like the first 5 chapters (lol 1 chappie on FP)Wonderful character creation and I doubt your school woudl post it... I was gonna write a short story to post in my schools magazine.. but i go to a private catholic school... so it didn't happen...but neway... Do u no russian?And thanks for your dedication to reading the roommate... I just posted to last chapter and all I have left is the epilogue...much love and ill go on to your next chapters~raventonguethemalice
I like the first 5 chapters (lol 1 chappie on FP)Wonderful character creation and I doubt your school woudl post it... I was gonna write a short story to post in my schools magazine.. but i go to a private catholic school... so it didn't happen...but neway... Do u no russian?And thanks for your dedication to reading the roommate... I just posted to last chapter and all I have left is the epilogue...much love and ill go on to your next chapters~raventonguethemalice
8/11/2006 c5 25Esquirella
I did enjoy this chapter very much! It looks like Ivan's going to concentrate his efforts on getting Aiden into a relationship with him, rather than just sit around knowing that Aiden likes him but not doing anything about it. Cool!
And I think we read a lot of the same stories because we like the same type of plots and characters! LOL! Now I'm planning to update some of these cliffies you speak of. LOL!
25EsquirellaI did enjoy this chapter very much! It looks like Ivan's going to concentrate his efforts on getting Aiden into a relationship with him, rather than just sit around knowing that Aiden likes him but not doing anything about it. Cool!
And I think we read a lot of the same stories because we like the same type of plots and characters! LOL! Now I'm planning to update some of these cliffies you speak of. LOL!
8/11/2006 c5 Youko Demon
YAY! thanks for the chapter dear! ^_^ It's the first one I read since I got home from work (It's 12 am). It was just what I needed. Fics and coffee are all that's keeping me going right now -_-
YAY! thanks for the chapter dear! ^_^ It's the first one I read since I got home from work (It's 12 am). It was just what I needed. Fics and coffee are all that's keeping me going right now -_-