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4/8/2007 c1 15JLei
8/15/2006 c1 8incognegro
I like the enjambent of this piece! :) I've never seen a structure like that before, but I really like it. I also like the repetition.
5/18/2006 c1 52godsandstars
beautiful. i'm inspired. you are so good with words. =]
5/6/2006 c1 13Jecai
I love the diverse references and the allusion at the end. People don't always work, but they keep running.
4/6/2006 c1 145dfgsfdghftgt44
Whoa! This is so weird and the way you broke the lines up (*and the general way it is written*). I love it cause it's just so weird, but at the same time, it makes almost perfect sense. I love this! Amazing job!

~Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thank you for the review of "Aubade of Taurus."
4/5/2006 c1 11Chemically Induced
nice creation of rushing emotions. i dont understand what is going on, exactly, but maybe it's irrelevant. it seems the feeling is what is important, and with that it dosn't lack. Watchtower Dark Eyes is a great line. great work. i like i like it. :)

love, c.induced.
4/4/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
4/2/2006 c1 26braindead1345
i kinda get it, your saying that you love her so much its like you dont know which way is up. theres raw energy in this
3/28/2006 c1 4Acting-Girly

I liked the poem, though I found it a tad confusing. "Watchtower Dark Eyes" had to be my favorite line. One comment I'd make would be to sperate the sentences a little more so it's easier to read. I want to thnak you for reviewing my poem, it was about me so I'm not quite sure what the cliches were. Thanks all the same, and lovely poem.

3/28/2006 c1 12Draketeeth
That was cool. strong emotion and nice imagery.
3/27/2006 c1 hey maria
"please, this deep/girl I can't barely stand...girl I love I love I love her..." Is this about wanting so much to love someone you don't?

I have a feeling I have no idea what I'm talking about. In any case, the repetition works well and the phrase "Watchtower Dark Eyes" is brilliant.
3/27/2006 c1 27Hax Rook
fair s of c.. clear enough to wonder, opaque enough to wander. fond of the simple repetitions. almost too fragmented sometimes. pleasantly different - keep building.
3/26/2006 c1 291behind the velvet curtain
I like the repetition and the breakup of the lines. It has a sort of rushed effect. Very nice.

And thank you for your review.
3/26/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
The repetition and the choice of words creates such a longing in this. great job
3/26/2006 c1 13Manda Pantxike Sterling
nice poem. I've never read one like it. very unique writing style
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