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4/19/2006 c1 33EnigmaticToast
Wow. This certainly does NOT suck. It's startling once you hit "Undressed." I guess i shoulda figured because of the creative title, but I was still taken by surprise. I loved it! =)
4/4/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
I like this... especially the ending... sad and well written
3/26/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Not bad; certainly not as bad as you would have us all believe in your summary (when people say that their poems suck that's such a turn off to a reader, I mean if you don't stand up for your work why would anyone else want to.) I really enjoyed it - I liked how provocative that last line was and you have a strong narration - don't count yourself short, your good. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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