for Poetry3/25/2008 c16 
4Bri-Cathleen
i feel unapreshiated
howsa bout i turn into a gnat and i fly into your ear
THEN i will be recognized
4Bri-Cathleeni feel unapreshiated
howsa bout i turn into a gnat and i fly into your ear
THEN i will be recognized
1/5/2008 c13 Bri-Cathleen
oh well um
idk
o
YAYA
Depressing
sunshine much?
no i think not
school monday
r u sad?
i bet u are
wow
this is becoming a monolague
YAYAYYAYAYAYA
poop on you
i am now finished
tootles
oh well um
idk
o
YAYA
Depressing
sunshine much?
no i think not
school monday
r u sad?
i bet u are
wow
this is becoming a monolague
YAYAYYAYAYAYA
poop on you
i am now finished
tootles
12/23/2007 c12 4amnesiac-vampire
love is a fallacy. these days, no one finds their true love, when they find their love, it lasts for a few years, then they're at each others throats. people want what they can't have, and when they have it, they don't want it. they don't put forth the effort needed to nurture a realationship. or that's my opinion on it anyways.
Great poem!
4amnesiac-vampirelove is a fallacy. these days, no one finds their true love, when they find their love, it lasts for a few years, then they're at each others throats. people want what they can't have, and when they have it, they don't want it. they don't put forth the effort needed to nurture a realationship. or that's my opinion on it anyways.
Great poem!
12/23/2007 c11 amnesiac-vampire
poor person, i could feel the pain they were going through. whoever said 'sticks and stones could break my bones but words can never hurt me' must really had not cared about anyone at all.
sorry i haven't commented much, i've been grounded a lot lately, plus school actually requires i do some homework now. keep up the great work kay!
poor person, i could feel the pain they were going through. whoever said 'sticks and stones could break my bones but words can never hurt me' must really had not cared about anyone at all.
sorry i haven't commented much, i've been grounded a lot lately, plus school actually requires i do some homework now. keep up the great work kay!
12/12/2007 c14 29Leaves of Labefaction
Some of these are a lot better than others, my favorite is 'Darkness.' (I am not trying to be a be a jerk)
29Leaves of LabefactionSome of these are a lot better than others, my favorite is 'Darkness.' (I am not trying to be a be a jerk)
12/16/2006 c10 4amnesiac-vampire
wow. this poem and darkness are one of my all time favourite poems! this is soo deep it really speaks out to me! great job!
awws there's not another poem T.T but as sir issac newton said, "an object in motion will stay in motion, untill it comes into contact with an unseen force" or it goes something like that. yeahs wells i really liked your poems, and sorry i write so much about nothing in particular in most of my reviews -.-' i hope i didn't scare you (i scare a lot of people) and if i did i'm sorry! ja ne.
4amnesiac-vampirewow. this poem and darkness are one of my all time favourite poems! this is soo deep it really speaks out to me! great job!
awws there's not another poem T.T but as sir issac newton said, "an object in motion will stay in motion, untill it comes into contact with an unseen force" or it goes something like that. yeahs wells i really liked your poems, and sorry i write so much about nothing in particular in most of my reviews -.-' i hope i didn't scare you (i scare a lot of people) and if i did i'm sorry! ja ne.
12/16/2006 c9 amnesiac-vampire
woah...this poem is by far the best poem you've done so far. darkness is both good and evil. thoughs that are in light colours often are evil while thoughs in darker wear, are more often nicer, sometimes...most times it's just the world is turning evil and everyone in it is playing monkey see monkey do. good job on the poem, short yet sweet.
woah...this poem is by far the best poem you've done so far. darkness is both good and evil. thoughs that are in light colours often are evil while thoughs in darker wear, are more often nicer, sometimes...most times it's just the world is turning evil and everyone in it is playing monkey see monkey do. good job on the poem, short yet sweet.
12/16/2006 c8 amnesiac-vampire
lol i have a fear of planes! i don't like high places when i'm over a city, it just shows how polluted and messed up it really is ('cept chicago that city rocks) though over the trees and forrest that mankind (why isn't there womankind?) hasn't cut down, is really pretty. and i fear not death, but what is to become of me after it! awsome poem by the way!
lol i have a fear of planes! i don't like high places when i'm over a city, it just shows how polluted and messed up it really is ('cept chicago that city rocks) though over the trees and forrest that mankind (why isn't there womankind?) hasn't cut down, is really pretty. and i fear not death, but what is to become of me after it! awsome poem by the way!
12/16/2006 c7 amnesiac-vampire
exactly, at midnight your supposed to write weird comments on peoples stories/poems not play with actions but with words. kudos on a kelws poem i like the morning dew in the moonlight and shinning stars in the sunlight part. i have my own metaphors for thoughs as i'm sure you have yours. and if you don't then wells it's still kewls n.n
exactly, at midnight your supposed to write weird comments on peoples stories/poems not play with actions but with words. kudos on a kelws poem i like the morning dew in the moonlight and shinning stars in the sunlight part. i have my own metaphors for thoughs as i'm sure you have yours. and if you don't then wells it's still kewls n.n
12/16/2006 c6 amnesiac-vampire
interesting. shadows are evil beings, but i think you were talking about the shadow of an object so yeahs. so many choices to choose from in life and more then half of them are because of your fate. see some people are born with natural talent, like music, so they have the predetemined choices of different musical choices for their lives. it's like a tree. it has one trunk that seperates into many branches.
interesting. shadows are evil beings, but i think you were talking about the shadow of an object so yeahs. so many choices to choose from in life and more then half of them are because of your fate. see some people are born with natural talent, like music, so they have the predetemined choices of different musical choices for their lives. it's like a tree. it has one trunk that seperates into many branches.
12/16/2006 c5 amnesiac-vampire
love sounds interesting the way you put it. i mean i doubt i'll ever experience it but hey i love my friends in a sorta way. kewls poem it flowed nicely in my opinion.
love sounds interesting the way you put it. i mean i doubt i'll ever experience it but hey i love my friends in a sorta way. kewls poem it flowed nicely in my opinion.