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11/18/2006 c1 7Arcularis
*laughs* okay. this really was awesome! i hope you do more spoofs of fairytales..like this. i super enjoyed it, and i hope to read more of this kind of stuff.

thanks for giving me a good end to a blah day.

10/25/2006 c1 2Viera Wing
Hah, that was interesting, and humorously so. Evil evil children. But so what, most children tales, nursery rhymes, whatever are evil anyway. Good one. Though I can't understand a single foreign word (Spanish, Mexican...they're all the same to me) you used, I did get that they were not good. Lol. And thanks for the review. Hope you'll enjoy the rest.
5/18/2006 c1 9GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
Oh that was horrible!


Simply awful, how could you burn those two little children up? I'm sure they were just troubled...


Okay, that was pretty darn funny. I really liked how the kids were the evil little devils instead of the innocently sweetlings they were in the original story. Honestly, those fairytales are filled with enough sterotypes to choke a horse...

Anyway, great job. I luved it...

5/16/2006 c1 grl w a birf
you are a genius. u shud get this published.
4/7/2006 c1 19Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose
I find this completely fascinating. It's hilarious! Seriously Hansel and Gretl always seemed like brats to me. Very funny!
4/7/2006 c1 18Plinky
Hehe, I love your first sentence. That's always a good start - made me giggle.

They really are horrible names! I never thought about it. Haha, I like the whole drunken thing. Awesome.

"This fat Hispanic broad just came over and started whaling on us!" Hilarious.

Very very random. I actually quite like Senora Gonzales. Hehe.

Keep writing!

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