9/5/2006 c1 17angels and effects
It's a little confusing from the start, maybe because you never really stated who the characters were. Real unique one though, it's a nice change from all the teen crush cliched stories! But yeah, you can improve (:
It's a little confusing from the start, maybe because you never really stated who the characters were. Real unique one though, it's a nice change from all the teen crush cliched stories! But yeah, you can improve (: